A Rattling Rhyme

I wandered lonely as a cloud
Stop right there for crying out loud
Plagiarism is not allowed
You'll be lynched by the P.S. crowd.

Okay, to be or not to be
Now come on you're being silly
They'll complain and they'll be suing
Ask you what it is you're doing.

Start again and think real hard
Don't be stealing from the bard
I'm struggling, need some inspiration
To create a rhyme sensation.

Grey brick upon brick, I'm on my way
That sounds good what do you say
I think I've heard that one before
But don't stop  now do give us more.

Problem is my muse has flown
She's left me struggling all alone
I've placed an advert in the Times
For a muse who's good at rhymes.

If one replies and answers back
I'll be on fire, back on track
But until then I'll have a rest
Then I'll be up there with the best.


For the purpose of this rhyme I've used three lines from three famous poets listed below.
William Wordsworth
William Shakespeare
and Louis MacNiece.

Written on 13th August for Nina Parmenters Rattling Rhyme contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 2:04 AM
Such an interesting read ! When you acknowledge the writer, it is no more plagiarism ! Placing brick upon brick, build your verse. Tom ! A good one.
Cunningham Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 2:13 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, glad that you enjoyed it. Tom
Mcconnell Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Good write Tom, liked this one! Blessings,Gordon
Cunningham Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 1:10 AM
Thank you Gordon, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Hey I am looking at Nina's comment to you and so glad that she faved it! Her form does inspire whimsy and you were most fittingly inspired.
Cunningham Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Thanks Andrea, I certainly was, but the meter was out and I was getting ready for Florida so let it go. Bit of fun really but a bonus was I managed to work out the bold print to show a conversation between two people. Have a great weekend. Tom
Messina Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Great write, Tom One day we will all be up there with the best. Let's hope our day doesn't come too soon. Blessings my friend...Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 3:54 AM
Thank you Charles, have not been active as I've been in Florida on a family holiday, still tired. Tom
Laurie Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:03 PM
G'day Tom … really enjoyed your fun write. I think at some stage, we all say at some stage 'I wish I had have got in first' - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Thank you Lindsay, greetings from Florida in the USA. Tom
Lamoureux Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 9:01 AM
This is so much fun! I expect it will do very well!
Cunningham Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Thank you Richard. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Rattling poetry that attracts the attention of all with its majestic style dear , Tom! Good luck!
Cunningham Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Thank you Demetrios, greetings from sunny Florida. Tom
Bateman Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Hello Tom, Best of Luck in the contest here with this entry. Rattling Rhymes -- eh?? Very Funny -- and well worth the read for sure!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Cunningham Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 1:21 AM
Thank you very much Gary, something a bit different lol. Tom
Man Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 4:47 AM
Tom, I loved your unique rattling rhymes. Your creative inspiration left my smiling. Your Muse definitely came out to play on this one!!
Cunningham Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 1:20 AM
Thank you Dave, and she's well rewarded as I've taken her to Florida lol. Tom
Laurie Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:07 PM
G'day Tom … a great read Tom. Amusement at its very best - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Thank you Lindsay, glad you enjoyed it Tom
Onclaud Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 2:50 PM
this so insane and wacky, i want more, tom...you just put those bard to shame, lol!...keep on rockin' ...huggs
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I was racking my brains and came up with that, something different for sure, glad you liked it. Watch this space. Tom
Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Very cleverly done..had fun reading your poem Tom..hope you win at the TOP.
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Vijay, glad you liked it. Tom
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August 14, 2018 at 12:12 PM
You just took Rattling Rhymes to a new height, and I like thinking of you way up there, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Thank you very much Caren, happy you liked it. Tom
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Hey, Tom, You have elevated Mr. MacNiece a bit here... Shakespeare, Wordworth, and who? Ha, ha, just kidding. Best of luck in Nina's contest. ~ Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Must be honest I'd never heard of him until I heard his verse on a dubliners track. Great poem though. Tom
Ellison Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:29 AM
Happy Florida Vacation Thomas.. my old stomping grounds!!! ENJOY!
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thanks Jack, just finishing packing , heading out in the morning.
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:28 AM
lol Tom like your humour and of course the quoted lines are superbly woven into your witty poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thanks Jan , wasn't sure if I had got the rattle right. But it rhymes anyway lol Tom
Blown Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:16 AM
nice ramble : )
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Thanks Sand.
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