Sandra Haight Poet Rhyme

A Rattling Rhyme

I fell head over heels loving you, 
and you now say to me we are through! 
How can you be so cruel, make me blue,
after all our great times, you construe
to be free, and this choice now pursue?

Just so quick, no review to undo
what you say are bad things done to you,
and no chance to amend in my view
any change that will work to renew
how you feel about me, work it through.

But now wait, looking back, it's adieu!
You're not worth my good heart, so hereto
we are done! Without me, you'll unglue
when a new love of life I ensue.
No more head over heels loving you!


Sandra M. Haight

~5th Place~
Contest: A Rattling Rhyme
Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Judged: 08/28/2018
  Fiction for Contest

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Connie Marcum Wong August 31, 2018 at 1:15 PM Somehow this poem reminds me of my ex husband who went on to marry three more times and is now alone. You did well Sandra, congratulations on your win! : )

Susan Gentry August 30, 2018 at 1:58 PM Congratulations on your win. Well done. Enjoyed reading. Sandra Haight August 30, 2018 at 8:00 PM Thank you very much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra

Viv Wigley August 29, 2018 at 6:49 AM Congrats, Sandra, on a piece that reminded me of of the old Gloria Gaynor song ' I will survive'. Kick ass! Viv x Sandra Haight August 30, 2018 at 8:00 PM Yes, I can see that too! One of my favorite songs! Thanks for the congrats and awesome comment! Sandra :) :)

Janice Canerdy August 28, 2018 at 7:19 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice Sandra Haight August 30, 2018 at 7:58 PM Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra

Gershon Wolf August 28, 2018 at 5:36 PM Nice one, Sandra! Congrats on your win. Best wishes, Gershon Sandra Haight August 30, 2018 at 7:57 PM Thank you very much, Gershon! Sandra :)

Michelle Faulkner August 12, 2018 at 5:07 PM I love how the tone turned from pleading to feisty - if we are through, good riddance to you! Sandra Haight August 13, 2018 at 8:55 PM Thank you, Michelle, for your visit and supportive comment! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

Joanna Daniel August 8, 2018 at 7:51 AM A love lost, yet you win in the end:) Sandra Haight August 9, 2018 at 5:50 PM Thank you, Jo! Hugs, Sandra

Tom Cunningham August 6, 2018 at 12:27 PM You wrote this well Sandra, Lovely rhythm, good luck. Tom Sandra Haight August 9, 2018 at 5:50 PM Thank you, Tom. It was a fun write! Sandra