A Rattling Rhyme

levity
brevity
amorous
glamorous 
dreamily
steamily
rapidly 
happily
carefully
gracefully 
hammering
stammering
clamoring
yammering
merrily
verily 
quackery
hackery
rendez-vous
mountain dew



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on February 9, 2019 for contest SCREWED XX sponsored by ROB CARMACK  -  RANKED 14TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gaul Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Having fun with word play is a good thing Line. You did it so frèely and well here. I particularly like how you started and ended this. Took some courage to twist it so wildly with mountain dew at the close. Enjoyed it.
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Greg.
Wolf Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 6:45 PM
Ya-hoo!
Gauthier Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Perfect rhyme for last line. Thank you so much, Gershon.
Faulkner Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 3:25 PM
This has such a fun flow, feels like when you go down a water slide!
Gauthier Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 4:42 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.
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