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A Rattling Rhyme

levity brevity amorous glamorous dreamily steamily rapidly happily carefully gracefully hammering stammering clamoring yammering merrily verily quackery hackery rendez-vous mountain dew Submitted on August 19, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND RIME contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND February 9, 2019 for contest SCREWED XX sponsored by ROB CARMACK - RANKED 14TH and July 30, 2018 for contest A RATTLING RHYME sponsored by NINA PARMENTER

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Greg Gaul
Date: 2/13/2019 9:49:00 PM
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Having fun with word play is a good thing Line. You did it so frèely and well here. I particularly like how you started and ended this. Took some courage to twist it so wildly with mountain dew at the close. Enjoyed it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2019 10:13:00 PM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Greg.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2018 6:45:00 PM
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Ya-hoo!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/30/2018 6:48:00 PM
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Perfect rhyme for last line. Thank you so much, Gershon.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/30/2018 3:25:00 PM
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This has such a fun flow, feels like when you go down a water slide!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/30/2018 4:42:00 PM
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Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.

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