Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Clerihew

A Rare Phenomenon-W

Everyday my beautiful neighbor lovely luring Lily
Stands under the sun and gazes at it directly.
One day, her gaze the sun could not bear
Set earlier than usual, a phenomenon very rare.

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Third place winner
Contest : Giggle Poetry (Clerihew)
Dr. Ram Mehta

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Robin Davis August 25, 2014 at 9:48 PM Dr. Ram A cute and clever rhyme that made me smile and chuckle. Thank you for the nice comment on my Fish poem.

August 22, 2010 at 10:20 AM Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on your third place finish in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2010 at 10:42 PM Hey, here I see you again tonight. Congratulations, Dr. Ram! Luv, Andrea

Sidney Hall Mad Poet August 19, 2010 at 12:59 AM Congratz Dr. Ram Metha on your well deserved 3rd place

Lynette Chachere August 18, 2010 at 4:09 PM wow,(: a clever poet indeed. don't stare at the sun! & congrats to you. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Francine Roberts August 18, 2010 at 11:43 AM congrats on your win Dr. Ram

Susan Mills August 18, 2010 at 9:28 AM Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the clerihew contest! A lovely poem! Love, Susan

Daniel Cwiak August 18, 2010 at 8:51 AM Interested in the neighbors? I think it's great...and the write is even better. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Carol Sunshine Brown August 18, 2010 at 4:52 AM Congratulations Dr.Ram on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry". Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan August 17, 2010 at 9:59 PM Heartiest Congrats on your win dear Dr. mehta. Many thanks for your comments and encouragement.

Wilma Neels August 17, 2010 at 8:57 PM Dr Ram, congratulations on your 3rd place :)

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2010 at 6:52 PM Congratulations for you too!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 17, 2010 at 5:51 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in the Giggles Poetry contest .. another brilliant write and super win to enjoy my friend.. with luv.. caio..

Carrie Richards August 17, 2010 at 5:42 PM Well done, Dr. Ram!! She stared the sun down!! How clever!! Congratulations....nice to share 3rd with you! :)

Joyce Johnson August 17, 2010 at 5:42 PM Very clever, Doctor. congratulations.

Carolyn Devonshire August 17, 2010 at 5:16 PM Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman August 17, 2010 at 5:03 PM Phenomenal victory with this third place write, Dr Ram. Congratulations! Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire August 17, 2010 at 3:25 PM Quite witty, Dr. Ram. But you better warn Lily that staring at the sun can cause blindness. Like the way you made it seem that the sun needed to break away from her stare. Best wishes in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown August 17, 2010 at 12:12 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dr. Ram. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels August 17, 2010 at 4:50 AM hehe, love the twist Dr. Ram.. enjoyed your unique clerihew, Wilma

Harry Horsman August 17, 2010 at 1:38 AM enjoyed this Clerihew, Harry

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2010 at 9:31 PM wow, that is quite the ending, like a twist! She must be stunning, sunning!! LUv, Andrea

Iolanda Scripca August 16, 2010 at 8:49 PM Hahaha! So funny :) I wonder what's next? A Solar Eclipse with this LIly :) Thanks for you nice comment. By the way where is the next International Poetry Meeting?