Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

A Rainy Morning

the dimness
of this dawn
cannot cloud
my thoughts
that rise
flushed
across my flesh

i thirst for you
more than this soil
thirsts for rain
as it falls
airily down
surrounding me
in whispered breaths

passion unfolds
in blushed hues
across dream's horizon
where the flickers of stars
still dance within
the edges of azure
peering back
beneath the clouds

i feel the warmth
encompassing me
despite this rain
falling down
as dawn breaks
in splashes
of thoughts
beautifully

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L. J. Carber February 7, 2020 at 11:50 AM This is really very nice, beautifully lyrical in its poignant simplicity--[my kind of poetry]congrats!

Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 7:49 AM I see this beautiful poem at the top of the winners circle and I smile because that is exactly where it belongs. Congratulations Sandy. I am so happy for you. Sandra Adams February 7, 2020 at 9:55 AM thank you so much Chris...I appreciate you and your kind words my friend... hugs

Caren Krutsinger January 1, 2020 at 5:16 PM There is a romanticalness about this that gives it a beautiful push. Sandra Adams January 1, 2020 at 8:02 PM Thank you Caren... it was a rainy morning and i had to go out in it and was trying to convince myself that it was a beautiful day... hugs

Quoth Theraven December 30, 2019 at 11:50 PM Sandra, Now there's the loveliness, there's the poet's art. You found it in the rain. -Richard Sandra Adams December 31, 2019 at 6:41 AM Thank you Richard.... Happy New Year my friend... hugs :)

Gordon Mcconnell December 30, 2019 at 4:12 PM Lovely imagery Sandy with nice tones of romance thrown in. Great pen! Hugs and blessings for 2020. Blessings,Gordon Sandra Adams December 30, 2019 at 4:24 PM Thank you so much Gordon :) hugs

Ann Foster December 30, 2019 at 9:42 AM You are such a lovely romantic... hugs. Ann Sandra Adams December 30, 2019 at 11:07 AM Thank you Ann...i guess i can dream soft sometimes :) hugs

John Hamilton December 30, 2019 at 9:36 AM Splashes of thoughts... loved that, and every word of this melancholy delight! Sandra Adams December 30, 2019 at 11:03 AM Thank you so much John....rainy day, seems to be typical these days but grateful it's not snow...we haven't really had a taste of that yet this year... hugs

Richard Lamoureux December 30, 2019 at 9:14 AM I have a sudden craving for a rainy day.;0) Sandra Adams December 30, 2019 at 11:02 AM lol...Thank's Rick...we have plenty of rain that i'd be willing to share :) hugs

Chris Green December 30, 2019 at 7:56 AM A rainy day where clouds hover overhead and dampness lingers everywhere, but love is also in the air allowing the sun to shine in your heart. Beautifully done Sandy. This was really nice to read this morning. Sandra Adams December 30, 2019 at 11:01 AM Thank you Chris... sometimes we got to make our own sunshine and pretend it's not a dreary day... after being out in it half the morning i am less enthusiastic if truth be told :) hugs

Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 6:56 AM A blend of uplifting thoughts on the dim of rainy morning as in: the dimness of this dawn cannot cloud my thoughts..and..i feel the warmth encompassing me despite this rain. Passion unfolds in your words my friend. Sandra Adams December 30, 2019 at 11:00 AM Thank you so much Vijay...i had to go out in that dreary rain this morning and was trying to find some beauty within the day...i made my own sunrise...not feeling so cheery about it after venturing out... hugs :)