A Rainy Day

A RAINY DAY

The weather keeps on slicing my day
Always leaving me the smaller piece
The toothless sun deceives me
Into dreaming a dry landscape
The weather has intervened
Again and again with its bare rhetoric
My desperate try to counter it
Nosedives to the nearest ditch.

A honeycomb melts into earth
I perceive my palm itching to stretch
For one seedless sweetness. I am 
Near a vacuum bordering an expanse of worth
Like in a vision, the visionary that I am
Does  trust  the sights. For one moment
And other moments.

Clatter of compromise is heard beside flowing streams
What worth it carries, what wealth it sells
I move from pouring walls
To the storehouse of warm truce
Right across the sluice gates
Between nothing and everything


For Leonora's contest
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:25 AM
- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... - I enjoy reading yours, Jag. !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 10, 2014 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem.
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 5:55 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you, Jagat
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:30 AM
wonderful free verse many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 2:37 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Jag. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
Neels Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:27 AM
Lovely write S, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma
George   Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Lovely Free Verse, Many congrats on your win. Lainie
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations S. on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 8:24 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., S.nair
Nair Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 8:33 AM
Many many thanks...and congrats..sj
Falotico Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Congrats my dear poet...
Nair Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 8:32 AM
thanks a lot...sj
Sweetheart Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 7:28 AM
Congrats js on another great win with this creatively beautiful write luv.. enjoy .. awesome..
Nair Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 8:31 AM
thank you so much,,,,sj
A   Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 2:33 AM
S.J., Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d
Nair Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Thank you so much for choosing my poem for placement in the contest. it is very kind of you. In fact rain is a favourite topic with me and i have a long poem which is too long to fit into the PS format for posting....sj
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