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A Rainy Day

A RAINY DAY The weather keeps on slicing my day Always leaving me the smaller piece The toothless sun deceives me Into dreaming a dry landscape The weather has intervened Again and again with its bare rhetoric My desperate try to counter it Nosedives to the nearest ditch. A honeycomb melts into earth I perceive my palm itching to stretch For one seedless sweetness. I am Near a vacuum bordering an expanse of worth Like in a vision, the visionary that I am Does trust the sights. For one moment And other moments. Clatter of compromise is heard beside flowing streams What worth it carries, what wealth it sells I move from pouring walls To the storehouse of warm truce Right across the sluice gates Between nothing and everything For Leonora's contest S.Jagathsimhan Nair

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Date: 10/10/2014 8:25:00 AM
- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... - I enjoy reading yours, Jag. !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem.
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Date: 10/10/2014 5:55:00 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you, Jagat
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Date: 10/10/2014 4:30:00 AM
wonderful free verse many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:37:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Jag. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:27:00 AM
Lovely write S, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:38:00 AM
Lovely Free Verse, Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations S. on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 8:24:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., S.nair
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 7/17/2011 8:33:00 AM
Many many thanks...and congrats..sj
Date: 7/17/2011 7:33:00 AM
Congrats my dear poet...
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 7/17/2011 8:32:00 AM
thanks a lot...sj
Date: 7/17/2011 7:28:00 AM
Congrats js on another great win with this creatively beautiful write luv.. enjoy .. awesome..
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 7/17/2011 8:31:00 AM
thank you so much,,,,sj
Date: 7/17/2011 2:33:00 AM
S.J., Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 7/17/2011 8:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for choosing my poem for placement in the contest. it is very kind of you. In fact rain is a favourite topic with me and i have a long poem which is too long to fit into the PS format for posting....sj

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