Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

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For Brian Strand's '1400' Poetry Contest

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a rain hiku

scathing heat followed
      by unexpected d
                                 o
                                  w                                                                                                                                                                   
                                    n
                                     pour

verdancy   p  r  o  l  o  n g  e  d

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David Scott September 1, 2025 at 8:21 PM Like the pattern and style xxdavidscott

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 9, 2025 at 3:16 PM I greatly enjoyed this beautifully crafted haiku, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. :)

Bernardo F. Asuncion August 4, 2025 at 2:31 PM Congrats, dear Ma'am Sara for this big win. You are the best! Love~BFA

Krishnanand Guptar August 4, 2025 at 11:45 AM Congratulations dear poetess for your top win in a row, now with this pleasant Haiku on heavy rain, often typical of summer. Wishing you a sunny day.

Sotto Poet August 4, 2025 at 11:21 AM Good Form Haiku, Andrea. It's incredibly original. Congratulations on your win.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh August 2, 2025 at 9:08 PM Very nice

Paige Hind August 2, 2025 at 2:32 PM Very pretty!!

John Fleming August 2, 2025 at 2:19 PM Very clever use of the syllables provided by your chosen words, Andrea. Nicely done. :) john

Joseph P. DiMino August 2, 2025 at 8:34 AM God was not in hurry...loving the season and the moment. Well done.

Abdullah Alhemaidy August 1, 2025 at 5:28 PM lookalike waterfall!

Bill Baker August 1, 2025 at 4:46 PM Nice Shape Haiku, Andrea. It's very creative, my friend. Bill