a rain hiku

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For Brian Strand's '1400' Poetry Contest

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scathing heat followed by unexpected d o w n pour verdancy p r o l o n g e d

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Joe Dimino

Date: 8/2/2025 8:34:00 AM

God was not in hurry...loving the season and the moment. Well done.

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 8/2/2025 8:02:00 AM

Its raining here on our side and rivers are overflowing!! In our beautiful sanatan dharma (called as Hinduism ,although not the correct term), we worship every aspect of nature. "Indra", is the demi-god of rain and we are thankful to Indra for the rains.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/1/2025 5:28:00 PM

lookalike waterfall!

Bill Baker

Date: 8/1/2025 4:46:00 PM

Nice Shape Haiku, Andrea. It's very creative, my friend. Bill