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A Quirky Romance

Work done we meet
at home for treat
we dine and eat
get off our seats

His hand on mine
one on my spine
we dance and glide
spin round the side

Heart beats so fast
dance steps too rash
we trip and fall
down the long hall

Right to the bed
the rose is red
come close the door
take me I'm yours

Turn out the light
its way too bright
dress stuck on head
help or I'm dead

His shirt is gone
thinks he's Don Juan
ate too much nuts
sucks in his gut

We play a tune
that fills the room
sighs, moans and groans
rings from cell phone

At last were spent
bed skewed and bent
our love a mess
we rest in nest









1-30-18

Copyright © Cheryl Hoffman | Year Posted 2018

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Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/15/2018 10:45:00 PM Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Cheryl - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-) Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/16/2018 7:25:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Gregory; really appreciate it! Blessings to you too my friend~Che :)

John Gondolf Date: 2/6/2018 4:56:00 AM Cheryl, back to say congrats. John Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/16/2018 7:25:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit John; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Eve Roper Date: 2/5/2018 8:56:00 PM Congratulations on your win,Cheryl ! Great rhymes and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/5/2018 9:11:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit; glad you liked it Eve!~Che :)

Alexis Y. Date: 2/5/2018 10:40:00 AM Hi Cheryl, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/5/2018 8:46:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Alexis; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Sandra Haight Date: 2/4/2018 7:38:00 PM Too funny, Cheryl! I enjoyed reading your poem! Delightfully written! Congrats on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/4/2018 7:55:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Sandra; glad you enjoyed it!~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/4/2018 7:36:00 PM oh I LOVE that you inserted humor into yours. This was so delightful, Cheryl. Glad to see this today!! (oh and congrats for the win too) Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/4/2018 7:41:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Andrea; glad you liked the humor!~Che :)

Line Gauthier Date: 2/4/2018 6:26:00 PM Very cute, Cheryl. Congrats on your winning poem. Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/4/2018 7:40:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/4/2018 4:38:00 PM Well done Cheryl. Great work. Regards Tom Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/4/2018 7:35:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind comment and congrats Tom; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Silent One Date: 2/4/2018 3:47:00 PM Sounds really quirky lol.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/4/2018 7:35:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind quirky comment (lol) and for placing me as one of the winners S/O; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Pat Adams Date: 2/2/2018 7:36:00 AM This is really funny. Ate too much nuts in the middle is like what?? You always surprise me. Great rhyme as well.......pat Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/2/2018 8:06:00 AM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; thats what happens when I eat too many nuts lol!;0 Appreciate it!~Che :)

John Gondolf Date: 2/1/2018 3:44:00 PM Nicely done, Cheryl, I enjoyed reading. The line "bed skewed and bent"...really Cheryl...haha Best of luck. John Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/1/2018 8:19:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; glad you enjoyed it and appreciate the encouragement!~Che :)

Alexis Y. Date: 2/1/2018 3:19:00 PM Lol! Cheryl, I really enjoyed this humorous piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/1/2018 8:15:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Alexis; glad you enjoyed it! Appreciate the encouragement!~Che :)

Mike Hauser Date: 2/1/2018 9:41:00 AM Bahahaha! You are so funny! Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/1/2018 8:14:00 PM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike; glad you got chuckle out of it! Appreciate it!~Che :)

Heidi Sands Date: 1/31/2018 8:33:00 AM LOL This was funny Cheryl. Well done :) Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 1/31/2018 8:44:00 AM Glad you got chuckle out of it Heidi! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/31/2018 3:38:00 AM Damn phone again, always goes off at the wrong time. Great rhyme Cheryl Regard Tom. PS.One thing that annoys me is your talking to someone and their phone rings and they say "must get this" egh, hang on, I'm talking grrrr. That's it rant over. Login to Reply Cheryl Hoffman Date: 1/31/2018 8:35:00 AM Yes when you least expect it to lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; Appreciate your rant!~Che ;)