A Quiet Time

No words to say
No songs to sing
The voice has gone numb
The mind refuses to run.

Letting my eyes dance away
Upon mountains and valleys
My ears listen to the concert
Of the hidden spring and the birds.

No thoughts to convey
No sounds out of my mouth
Quietly I listen, absorbing the beauty
Upon which my eyes feast, and my heart beats.

I hear your voice 
Speaking softly to me
Of words that feed and color
My life with love and splendor.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 10.03.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ruebel Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 8:36 AM
CarolineCecile, I find this so beautiful and fulfilling. It made me stop and actually take a deep breath and listen. Thank you for your exceptional kind words. As always, Shar
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October 4, 2010 at 4:42 PM
a graceful soothing write, tender, and pleasant to read and enjoy, thank you, chuck
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 10:51 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Caroline. Love, Carol
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October 4, 2010 at 2:32 AM
Quel poème grand et remontant, Caroline! And I must agree with John, but I myself like the second stanza best. Thank you for your kind comments and suggestions to "Ein Herbsttag". You are right, "non-ending" sounds smoother than not ending and I already changed it. J'apprécie vraiment votre poésie et votre a choisi des mots! Alles Gute und eine gute neue Woche!...Gert
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October 3, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Ps. ~ "'Your Treasures' Last Stanza Is, 'Absolutely Beautiful!!!'" ~ Bye Again, "Dear 'Precious & Sweet,' Gifted Caroline!":) ~
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October 3, 2010 at 8:08 PM
Smile ~ "Very Soft, Lovely & Beautiful 'Dear, Gifted & Precious Caroline Cecile!!!'" ~ I love the gentle soul inside of these wonderful words which "Your Beauty" has so tenderly brushed upon this memerizing canvas of pastels colours from within "Your Crimson Hearts, 'Beautiful Hue;' A Fave!!!" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Lovely CarolineCecile Delacroix;" Bye!:) ~
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