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A Quiet Place For Rebirth

note in the margin of a book
I come here, and so often without mass or time, 
Recovering my childhood's first absence from school
This is Dunstan River, and so celestial the clime
I hear water lillies breathing in the winking pool
Needlecase or lion flies, sentinels of the stream
In which a soul can see blue past the deep heaven
Let them in the schoolyard shout, I will dream
In the glow of green and light I sip the leaven
I must remember please do not fall asleep here
The tides move fast that cut against despair.
                   ..........
           Poem recovered from a note

Brawling schoolyard, frenzied desire
Balm of liquid green drenched
The flame; light falls wingless from trees
Deeper peace here's entrenched

Tomorrow is a girl, bright leaf
Drinking light; her lips taste -
Nectared flowers; yearning I love
Where water earth errase.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2012 11:33:00 AM
I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:46:00 AM
sentiments flowing, david..belated congrats on your special win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:34:00 AM
DAVID, , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 8:30:00 AM
Interesting quiet place and poem..Thanks for entering my contest..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win David , well done. xx
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