A Quiet Place

Take me to our river of dream
A more beautiful sight my eyes have never seen
By Its emerald green banks, we shall walk hand In hand
Our dream shall be forever you do understand

Not for one moment or not for one day
We shall walk by dream's river, Love Is our way
And ever In life shall our dream be the same
And when All Is done, Love shall always remain

Let us walk by the river, Its beauty shall unfold
In the water's reflection, your glory shall be told
This Is our Love's vision, this river so serene
As we walk by our river, In the midst of a dream.

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Date: 7/21/2022 2:42:00 PM
This is a very comforting dream. A pleasure to read and settle in for love's walk. Linda
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/22/2022 2:59:00 PM
Hi Linda, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. This is my quiet place, where I ever go to find love and peace. I love the river, watching its peaceful waters. I love the walk. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
Date: 7/21/2022 1:29:00 AM
Mike, this is truly a wonderfully inspiring gem. " Let us walk by the river, Its beauty shall unfold In the water's reflection, your glory shall be told This Is our Love's vision, this river so serene As we walk by our river, In the midst of a dream."" Another gem, another fav for me! God bless..
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/21/2022 11:40:00 AM
Hi Robert, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is always appreciated. Thank you also for the fave, my friend. This river is my place of contemplation. Here I can find my love at the bend of the river. May the waters ever run peaceful. Your friend always ..... Mike.
Date: 7/19/2022 10:36:00 PM
This sounds like a heavenly place to rest quietly, contemplating love Mike. Blessings xxoo
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/20/2022 7:02:00 AM
Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece. I have just read your quiet place and it puts mine to shame. Still, I always love to walk along the riverbank and watch the serene waters that flow so peacefully. I have always liked the water but there is one thing, I always manage to get myself wet by falling in. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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