A Quiet Place

The evening's quiet sun sets before me
enveloping me, enticing me with calm
the sky's purple colors float on the sea
a breeze warm is a soft brush on my palm
this mystical meditation is serene
and frees my soul to its ambient form
peaceful silent visions that I may glean
will caress my eyes and invite the warm
I dream of wearing clouds like a garment
as they glide across the horizon's line
soft silhouettes upon the wind's current
that allow my heart and soul to align
like tides gathering fish into a shoal
the quiet has taken shape in my soul

7/15/22 Contest...A Quiet Place
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Rose  Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 3:38 PM
Your poem was perfectly aligned to me, congrats on your win, and thank you for joining my contest Frederic
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 8:21 AM
wonderful sonnet, Frederic. Big congrats on your fine win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 9:41 PM
I love your sonnet Frederic. Your ending left me with chills from its depth. Just beautiful! Congratulations on your high placement. Blessings xxoo
Logan Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:33 PM
Your last couplet is simply beautiful. Congratulations on your winning spot in the contest, Frederic.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on this win. A pretty write with "the sky's purple colors float on the sea." Have a great/blessed day.......................
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:36 PM
Fredric beautiful poem and I like the way you have used rhyme!! All the best in the contest!
Thomas Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 5:33 PM
How very soothing Frederic. A written dream.
Parker Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:45 PM
thank you dear poet ,I'm so happy to hear from you
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