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A Quickie

beneath ocean waves
dreams of those who dream - simmer
waiting for that spark
to lift them from their slumber
in vibrant purple bubbles 

David Mohn
-21 Jun 2014-

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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December 9, 2014 at 3:37 PM

Now I feel like diving deep under, and let the ocean bring me up. Really Beautirful

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

December 9, 2014 at 6:29 AM

Congratulations.Well done dear poet Mohn.Regards. -Safa

December 6, 2014 at 6:44 AM

Wonderful imagination, congrats on your great win.

Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2014 at 8:45 PM

this was such a fun contest and I am glad to see at last it is judged and you got a great placement. Congratulations.

December 2, 2014 at 1:18 AM

wonderful imagery - great win! Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2014 at 9:32 PM

wow, this is very nice. Quite imaginative!! I hope it scores high.

June 22, 2014 at 2:16 AM

David, a beautiful write. Mohan

Barbara Gorelick

June 22, 2014 at 1:06 AM

Nice one! dreams simmering is a great thought. BG

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