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beneath ocean waves dreams of those who dream - simmer waiting for that spark to lift them from their slumber in vibrant purple bubbles David Mohn -21 Jun 2014-

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Date: 12/9/2014 3:37:00 PM
Now I feel like diving deep under, and let the ocean bring me up. Really Beautirful
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations.Well done dear poet Mohn.Regards. -Safa
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Date: 12/6/2014 6:44:00 AM
Wonderful imagination, congrats on your great win.
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Date: 12/5/2014 8:45:00 PM
this was such a fun contest and I am glad to see at last it is judged and you got a great placement. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/2/2014 1:18:00 AM
wonderful imagery - great win! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/2/2014 9:32:00 PM
wow, this is very nice. Quite imaginative!! I hope it scores high.
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Date: 6/22/2014 2:16:00 AM
David, a beautiful write. Mohan
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Date: 6/22/2014 1:06:00 AM
Nice one! dreams simmering is a great thought. BG
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