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A Quickie

breaking the surface cares and worries, now set free heartache and pain gone, smiling face reaching my eyes because of your love (This is what the picture conveys to me) Penned 20/6/2014 Contest : 5 lines(quickie) Seren Roberts.

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Tim Smith

Date: 12/6/2014 10:31:00 AM

Congrats on your quickie ....hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2014 9:10:00 PM

this was beautiful, seren. I hope you are doing ok this Christmas season?

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/2/2014 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on you win Seren. A Fav.

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/2/2014 4:56:00 PM

Thank you Maurice, the title through me though, I had forgotten it, wrote so long ago....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 1:46:00 AM

beautifully portrayed Seren - its a 7 from me:-) congrats. Hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/2/2014 5:49:00 AM

Lol was relieved to see the title on all poems...thx ....Seren

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/19/2014 5:51:00 AM

To my friend across the pond: I found this little gem in the 'Tanka Poems' list on the Homepage and yes I agree! A quickie can quickly quell 'cares and worries'...

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/19/2014 1:04:00 PM

omg I cant believe this title and what it implies, I dont even remember writing it......am sure soup has made a mistake lol .....Seren