Seren Roberts Poet Tanka

A Quickie

breaking the surface
cares and worries, now set free
heartache and pain gone, 
smiling face reaching my eyes
because of your love



(This is what the picture conveys to me)


Penned 20/6/2014

Contest : 5 lines(quickie)

Seren Roberts.

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Tim Smith December 6, 2014 at 10:31 AM Congrats on your quickie ....hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2014 at 9:10 PM this was beautiful, seren. I hope you are doing ok this Christmas season?

Maurice Yvonne December 2, 2014 at 6:36 AM Congratulations on you win Seren. A Fav. Seren Roberts December 2, 2014 at 4:56 PM Thank you Maurice, the title through me though, I had forgotten it, wrote so long ago....Seren

Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:46 AM beautifully portrayed Seren - its a 7 from me:-) congrats. Hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts December 2, 2014 at 5:49 AM Lol was relieved to see the title on all poems...thx ....Seren

Tim Ryerson August 19, 2014 at 5:51 AM To my friend across the pond: I found this little gem in the 'Tanka Poems' list on the Homepage and yes I agree! A quickie can quickly quell 'cares and worries'... Seren Roberts August 19, 2014 at 1:04 PM omg I cant believe this title and what it implies, I dont even remember writing it......am sure soup has made a mistake lol .....Seren