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I feel as though my mind is levitating, when I see bubbles floating over the ocean; a tide rises as though it wants to kiss one of the invisible, hollow balls, as though they were from the gods...... Name: Teddy Kimathi Date: 20/06/2014

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Date: 12/5/2014 8:59:00 PM
very interesting where you let this one take you!! Congrats on the win, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/8/2014 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, BTW, you are one of the best PS members that I know in interesting comments. Lolest......!! ^_^
Date: 12/2/2014 1:40:00 AM
beautiful images - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/2/2014 4:29:00 AM
Thanks Jan! ^_^
Date: 6/20/2014 5:52:00 AM
A nice take on the theme, Teddy. Best for contest. Mohan
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2014 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Mohan! ^_^

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