Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

A Quickie

I feel as though my mind is levitating,
when I see bubbles floating
over the ocean; a tide rises as though it wants to kiss
one of the invisible, hollow balls,
as though they were from the gods......


Name: Teddy Kimathi

Date: 20/06/2014

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Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2014 at 8:59 PM very interesting where you let this one take you!! Congrats on the win, Teddy. Teddy Kimathi December 8, 2014 at 9:12 AM Thanks Andrea, BTW, you are one of the best PS members that I know in interesting comments. Lolest......!! ^_^

Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:40 AM beautiful images - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Teddy Kimathi December 2, 2014 at 4:29 AM Thanks Jan! ^_^

Mohan Chutani June 20, 2014 at 5:52 AM A nice take on the theme, Teddy. Best for contest. Mohan Teddy Kimathi June 20, 2014 at 7:54 AM Thanks Mohan! ^_^