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A Quickie

Colorful bouncing bubbles pops close and constellate . . . As I am tease and toss by brisk ocean waves Rollicking lots from me wonder, laughter, thrill and chase Surfing! Surfing side by side with bubbles and playful tides Arousing both from me a fountain of youth, excitement and race! (c) Olive Eloisa 11:36pm June 19, 2014 ***i love those bubbles.. :D!!! weeeeee!!!!

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James Fraser

Date: 12/8/2014 1:23:00 PM

So much fun I see beside the ocean through your words Olive, James :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/6/2014 9:59:00 AM

Back with lovely congratulations Olive_eloi! Your bubbly quickie is a worthy winner. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2014 9:03:00 PM

hey, Olive, yours is the most like mine in this contest. we were on the same wavelength. congrats.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 1:43:00 AM

such a beautiful flow Olive - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Silverla Stmichael

Date: 6/24/2014 3:05:00 PM

Reminds me of Tristan & Isolde and childhood summer memories all at once. Vivacious and joyful. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/28/2014 11:35:00 AM

Thank you Silverla..:)

Weston Gregory

Date: 6/24/2014 7:07:00 AM

u ave expressed well the joy... so engaging

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/24/2014 1:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Weston.. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2014 4:54:00 AM

Delightful work for a contest?..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 5:06:00 PM

Thank you Sarah.. :) GOd bless you.. :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2014 6:39:00 PM

Yours is a very fun one . Mine is fun like this one too. WE both saw the bubbles like children!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/22/2014 12:19:00 AM

yes Andrea :D we may grow old by numbers but our heart's must still stay young.. :D hahaha Thank you fpr dropping by.. :D

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2014 6:01:00 PM

A quick rush of fun and excitement! Love the music in the flow of the words. So very bubbly! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/22/2014 12:17:00 AM

yes it is PAul.. :D good you have felt such cause i too felt that when I am making this..:D thank you.. :D

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/21/2014 11:41:00 AM

Love being by the shore, too. Nice poem! Thank G - d for lifeguards! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/21/2014 4:48:00 PM

hahhaa yes i need a lifeguard as I really don't know how to swim.. :D i only go for dips and tries and if somebody accompanies me well am brave!!! :D thanks you.. :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/20/2014 8:09:00 PM

Very nicely penned Olive...hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/21/2014 4:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph.. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/19/2014 9:53:00 PM

Everyone likes a quickie now and then! I hope anyways!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/22/2014 3:35:00 PM

:D yes yes yes. sometimes i do also follow my instincts.. :D and be impulsive and most of the time though im mistaken..

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/21/2014 7:10:00 PM

Oh Olive, not always, when is Ice cream, you have to be very very quick!!!! The early bird gets the worm, so they say!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/21/2014 4:46:00 PM

mmmn yes those who can't wait, in a hurry and have no patience they seem to be fond of all quickie.. :D?!

Tim Smith

Date: 6/19/2014 8:33:00 PM

How fun...wait now I sound like Casarah...I remember down in Clearwater Beach running on the beach with all the bubbles of the tide rushing on my feet...what a rush...hugs Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/21/2014 11:52:00 AM

How beautiful and how great that is...:D I like it really..:) thanks for the drop by..:)

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/19/2014 6:13:00 PM

How fun! I love bubbles too, was outside blowing bubbles with my daughter and came in to see this contest, what a twist of fate, your poem rocks good luck girl :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/21/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thank you Casarah.. :D i surely love bubbles as I sure enjoyed making this.. :D i remember how fun it is.. :D

Noelle Devereau

Date: 6/19/2014 5:54:00 PM

Very cute poem...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Noelle

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/21/2014 7:09:00 AM

Thank you NOelle.. :) i love bubbles.. :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/19/2014 4:18:00 PM

Such a happy poem..surfer girl! BG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2014 6:12:00 PM

hahaha yes yes dear BArbara.. :) I was smiling while I am making this.. :D I imagine the picture and I immersed that I see myself within that pic .. :D im always delighted with bubbles.. :D