Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

A Quickie

Colorful bouncing bubbles pops close and constellate . . .
As I am tease and toss by brisk ocean waves
Rollicking lots from me wonder, laughter, thrill and chase
Surfing! Surfing side by side with bubbles and playful tides
Arousing both from me a fountain of youth, excitement and race!

(c) Olive Eloisa
11:36pm
June 19, 2014

***i love those bubbles.. :D!!! weeeeee!!!!

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James Fraser December 8, 2014 at 1:23 PM So much fun I see beside the ocean through your words Olive, James :)

Paul Callus December 6, 2014 at 9:59 AM Back with lovely congratulations Olive_eloi! Your bubbly quickie is a worthy winner. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2014 at 9:03 PM hey, Olive, yours is the most like mine in this contest. we were on the same wavelength. congrats.

Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:43 AM such a beautiful flow Olive - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Silverla Stmichael June 24, 2014 at 3:05 PM Reminds me of Tristan & Isolde and childhood summer memories all at once. Vivacious and joyful. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 28, 2014 at 11:35 AM Thank you Silverla..:)

Weston Gregory June 24, 2014 at 7:07 AM u ave expressed well the joy... so engaging Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 24, 2014 at 1:03 PM Thank you so much Weston.. :)

Sara Kendrick June 23, 2014 at 4:54 AM Delightful work for a contest?..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 5:06 PM Thank you Sarah.. :) GOd bless you.. :D

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2014 at 6:39 PM Yours is a very fun one . Mine is fun like this one too. WE both saw the bubbles like children!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 22, 2014 at 12:19 AM yes Andrea :D we may grow old by numbers but our heart's must still stay young.. :D hahaha Thank you fpr dropping by.. :D

Paul Callus June 21, 2014 at 6:01 PM A quick rush of fun and excitement! Love the music in the flow of the words. So very bubbly! // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 22, 2014 at 12:17 AM yes it is PAul.. :D good you have felt such cause i too felt that when I am making this..:D thank you.. :D

Matthew Anish June 21, 2014 at 11:41 AM Love being by the shore, too. Nice poem! Thank G - d for lifeguards! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 21, 2014 at 4:48 PM hahhaa yes i need a lifeguard as I really don't know how to swim.. :D i only go for dips and tries and if somebody accompanies me well am brave!!! :D thanks you.. :)

Joseph May June 20, 2014 at 8:09 PM Very nicely penned Olive...hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 21, 2014 at 4:47 PM Thank you so much Joseph.. :)

Arthur Vaso June 19, 2014 at 9:53 PM Everyone likes a quickie now and then! I hope anyways!!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 22, 2014 at 3:35 PM :D yes yes yes. sometimes i do also follow my instincts.. :D and be impulsive and most of the time though im mistaken.. Arthur Vaso June 21, 2014 at 7:10 PM Oh Olive, not always, when is Ice cream, you have to be very very quick!!!! The early bird gets the worm, so they say!!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 21, 2014 at 4:46 PM mmmn yes those who can't wait, in a hurry and have no patience they seem to be fond of all quickie.. :D?!

Tim Smith June 19, 2014 at 8:33 PM How fun...wait now I sound like Casarah...I remember down in Clearwater Beach running on the beach with all the bubbles of the tide rushing on my feet...what a rush...hugs Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 21, 2014 at 11:52 AM How beautiful and how great that is...:D I like it really..:) thanks for the drop by..:)

Casarah Nance June 19, 2014 at 6:13 PM How fun! I love bubbles too, was outside blowing bubbles with my daughter and came in to see this contest, what a twist of fate, your poem rocks good luck girl :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 21, 2014 at 7:11 AM Thank you Casarah.. :D i surely love bubbles as I sure enjoyed making this.. :D i remember how fun it is.. :D

Noelle Devereau June 19, 2014 at 5:54 PM Very cute poem...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Noelle Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 21, 2014 at 7:09 AM Thank you NOelle.. :) i love bubbles.. :)

Barbara Gorelick June 19, 2014 at 4:18 PM Such a happy poem..surfer girl! BG Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 6:12 PM hahaha yes yes dear BArbara.. :) I was smiling while I am making this.. :D I imagine the picture and I immersed that I see myself within that pic .. :D im always delighted with bubbles.. :D