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For Contest: Etheree

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

21 February 2025

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Yes I guess Yes, I’m sure So ask once more Is it forever To fall apart - never It must be a long term thing Never should its final bell ring And it must always be right for me And must come with a lifetime guarantee So now you dither - so now you're unsure All hither thither - unlike before You knew what you wanted from me And briefly I couldn’t see It’s trash that you're selling A rat I’m smelling For that old car Won’t get far And so… No

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2025 7:07:00 AM

Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/2/2025 5:47:00 AM

Terry, nicely done with a fun twist of humor, congratulations on your winning placement.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/23/2025 9:38:00 PM

Hi Terry what a perfectly created Ethetee . The topic chosen blends well with the form and of course mostly your talented input, and awesome imagination. Enjoyed immensely Blessings Jennifer.

Terry Flood
Date: 2/25/2025 3:17:00 AM

Thanks, Jennifer. I think this may actually be only the second etheree I’ve ever attempted, so your appreciation is, in itself, appreciated ;-) Terry

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/21/2025 9:56:00 AM

ha! so well done, terry! love it!

Terry Flood
Date: 2/21/2025 11:25:00 AM

Thank you, Ilene. Did try to think of something more profound, but I soon reverted to form ;-)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2025 4:04:00 PM

hahahah hilarious Terry, i used to be uncertain and no I'm not so sure. hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood
Date: 2/20/2025 4:08:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. I really wasn’t sure this worked, so I kinda dithered over it. I just noticed that there was one place left in the contest so I thought I’d give it a go. Terry