Terry Flood Poet Etheree

Notes About The Poem

For Contest: Etheree 

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

21 February 2025

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A Question Popped

Yes
I guess
Yes, I’m sure
So ask once more
Is it forever
To fall apart - never
It must be a long term thing
Never should its final bell ring
And it must always be right for me
And must come with a lifetime guarantee
So now you dither - so now you're unsure
All hither thither - unlike before
You knew what you wanted from me
And briefly I couldn’t see
It’s trash that you're selling
A rat I’m smelling
For that old car
Won’t get far
And so…
No

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Sara Kendrick March 4, 2025 at 7:07 AM Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Tania Kitchin March 2, 2025 at 5:47 AM Terry, nicely done with a fun twist of humor, congratulations on your winning placement.

Jennifer Proxenos February 23, 2025 at 9:38 PM Hi Terry what a perfectly created Ethetee . The topic chosen blends well with the form and of course mostly your talented input, and awesome imagination. Enjoyed immensely Blessings Jennifer. Terry Flood February 25, 2025 at 3:17 AM Thanks, Jennifer. I think this may actually be only the second etheree I’ve ever attempted, so your appreciation is, in itself, appreciated ;-) Terry

Ilene Bauer February 21, 2025 at 9:56 AM ha! so well done, terry! love it! Terry Flood February 21, 2025 at 11:25 AM Thank you, Ilene. Did try to think of something more profound, but I soon reverted to form ;-)

Jan Allison February 20, 2025 at 4:04 PM hahahah hilarious Terry, i used to be uncertain and no I'm not so sure. hugs Jan xx Terry Flood February 20, 2025 at 4:08 PM Thanks, Jan. I really wasn’t sure this worked, so I kinda dithered over it. I just noticed that there was one place left in the contest so I thought I’d give it a go. Terry