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A Question of Love

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Loves promenades towards emptiness longing is a void darkness of a million universes where mythical black holes chant of timeless desires Yearning for carnal eternity where candles never die Two of us never met oceans apart gasping for affections in different times winds may have swept this way or that never seen Wind and candle lie in death so lost in emptiness

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Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/5/2018 11:45:00 AM

Achingly beautiful and brilliant is the depiction of intangible Love of the far distances! Untouchable Beauty, unattainable Love keep Life's mystery, flame and meaning going! A great deep poem Arthur! Enjoyed reading.. A FAV. Be blessed.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2018 8:12:00 PM

Romance at its finest

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/21/2018 3:06:00 PM

Arthur, A sad but lovely poem that expresses brilliantly the absence of love's tenderness. : )

Carole Duet

Date: 7/17/2018 8:25:00 PM

So sad and so true......

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/16/2018 12:30:00 PM

Arthur, I can relate to the loneliness in this write. Sometimes it seems like ages since we've made a strong connection with someone. Having encountered so many wonderful people on this website, there are many I long to meet in person. Excellent writing, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/15/2018 10:01:00 PM

Breathtaking in its nuanced emotional depth and beauty Arthur. Superb poetry and a fav! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2018 6:18:00 PM

wow, this is great writing, Arthur. I love the strong emotion it evokes. Like you, I have been really busy. Time, there just isn't enough of it!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/15/2018 4:44:00 PM

Oh Arthur...this reflects the reality of many..Affections..Distances which separates lands and hands..I really loved reading this..

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/15/2018 9:03:00 AM

this is a poem that takes every word with such meaning, it is a wine carefully sipped to appreciate the flavor. hugs xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/15/2018 8:26:00 AM

Well written Arthur! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2018 5:14:00 AM

this one tugs at the heartstrings my friend, adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Brendan Solomon

Date: 7/15/2018 2:19:00 AM

Now this one I really do love ~~~/|\~~~

Darren White

Date: 7/15/2018 2:19:00 AM

That is a beautiful poem. I love that language of longing and yearning. "Lost in emptiness" would be a great title ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2018 5:15:00 AM

love that title Darren:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/15/2018 1:11:00 AM

Beautifully sad, Arthur. Then not really because at least they found each other or made that connection. Real love is in the heart. The physical part is a choice. Really nice write:)