Daisy Marie Yant Poet Footle

A Queen's Review

This was inspired by Jan's Review......

Amend
My friend

A trick
be quick

I tried
Then cried

Thank God
I plod

On scene
My Queen

Review
my spew

You can
Aunt Jan

Tell me
Miss Dee

If right
Delight




Jan the "Footle" Queen gave me a constructive review
And she will do the same for you.
Seek her guidance and direction
She is filled with hugs and inspection.  Thanks "Aunt Jan" :)

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Tim Smith April 7, 2015 at 5:23 PM These are great....big fan....of Jan Daisy Marie Yant April 8, 2015 at 10:40 AM I am a fan...of Jan...because she can!! Much Love

Jan Allison April 6, 2015 at 4:46 PM aww Daisy it was my pleasure to be asked to help you with your footles :-) This is simply charming a 7 and faves from me:-) hugs jan xx Jan Allison April 6, 2015 at 4:52 PM Any time Daisy I have had so much support and encouragement on my poetry journey am only to willing to help:-) Hugs Jan xx Daisy Marie Yant April 6, 2015 at 4:50 PM I can't thank you enough. Much Love!!