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A Quarter Past Midnight

Her thoughts drift to him: It's a quarter past midnight and my thoughts, again, run to you How we got get here, inexplicable, lost in a fog, I am too Awake, I recall the day I walked away and the haunting image of your face In my anger, everything about you I have tried so hard, to erase In hindsight, your self-centeredness, was the iceberg, that caused your frostbite Froze my heart into unforgiveness as you were always out of sight I now pass time with friends and strangers, and the emptiness persists At times, I feel there is no tomorrow, but somehow my foolish heart insists Yet beyond pain, and silent desperation, I have to forget that you exist If there will ever be a "you and me", I must survive this quarter past midnight! His thoughts drift to her: It's a quarter past midnight and I wonder where your at Whether wrong or right, my love has been trained for combat I suffered frostbite when your love was so cold I couldn't adjust its thermostat I lose my appetite when I think about how you walked over me like a doormat Just when I think I'm moving ahead, I get a strong sense of deja vu I awake in my bed and unconsciously reach out to you I desperately need to move on, but you still remain in my heart Now I'm alone and the pain is slowly tearing me apart I pray the day will arrive and everything will be alright But first I must survive this memory of you and me at a quarter past midnight! * A collaboration with Jimmy M. Anderson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/29/2010 6:51:00 AM
Hi Audrey--you and Jimmy sure write flawlessly together :) keep it coming and I have to say, how cool is that--your names even rhyme ;)
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Date: 4/28/2010 11:51:00 PM
This is quite awesome Audrey, It sound so real, just the sort of thing that can happen when two people are to proud to admit they need each other. What a great write. well done both of you...cheers Maggie. thanks for stopping by..
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Date: 4/28/2010 4:21:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful...so amazing to read and a nice way to set it up with thoughts from both male and female... so enjoyed this collab creation...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/28/2010 12:58:00 PM
A lovely write....of what sounds like a break up from non or miscommunication, beautifully written by two people so intune how uncanny...Allie...p.s Audrey thanks so much for your kind comments...
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Date: 4/28/2010 8:03:00 AM
Great collaboration! Nicely done. I told Jimmy the same.
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Date: 4/27/2010 10:50:00 PM
Only your heart will tell you, it's such a torture when you want to live a memory but it's not there.but sometimes a thought can help mend in a small way to get through. -Always&Forever Lynette
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