A Quadrilateral Parallelogram Universe

Quadrilateral parallelograms of a Universe that never breathes  
we are brainwashed by a scientific box that never sleeps.  
Having been cloned with insipid performance and abhorrence
we have become A I s targets of the future, we are brainwashed. 
Frantic antic Dopamine released to the mind,  
putting us into a bullet sleep, they are robbing us blind.   
Like sheep with autoimmune disease, we're chained to reaction 
from a mechanical machine that is beginning to think for itself.  
The body follows the tilt of the head and the soul wilts, 
as we give away our ability to make decisions for ourselves. 

Living in a docile state of euphemisms we are stilted, living and  
giving A I s permission to mother and father us, without consent.    
Reprogrammed slowly we become the robots of the next Century
5D tempered glass, submersion diversion, humanistic and playful   
insisting on a monotone experience, lost, lost, lost * (in space) 
Ghosting our families, friends and lovers we are having an affair 
with technology, a long lasting affair that is costing us ourselves.   
Like Phil Collins once stated in a song, " Think Twice"
before you give away your cheese, to the "Ambidextrous Mice. "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Fowler Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Actually a fun poem Vie. Though we are tempted, we still are able to think for ourselves. This is a reminder to be aware and beware. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 10:04 AM
Someone wrote me a poem about this AI generation. I felt how cheating it is to generate a poem for someone else. I would never do it.
One Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Hey Vienna, I love how your poem offers a thought-provoking exploration of the perils and pitfalls of humanity's increasing dependence on technology and artificial intelligence. Through its vivid imagery, cultural references, and incisive critique, the poem prompts readers to contemplate the ethical and existential implications of surrendering control to the machines of the future
Rose  Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Dear Silent, I often have to self aware when it comes to how much time I dedicate to my computer lol, as everything in life, to the right extent it can be good too, so glad you understand my ways of thinking, have a great day :)
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