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A Quadrilateral Parallelogram Universe

Quadrilateral parallelograms of a Universe that never breathes we are brainwashed by a scientific box that never sleeps. Having been cloned with insipid performance and abhorrence we have become A I s targets of the future, we are brainwashed. Frantic antic Dopamine released to the mind, putting us into a bullet sleep, they are robbing us blind. Like sheep with autoimmune disease, we're chained to reaction from a mechanical machine that is beginning to think for itself. The body follows the tilt of the head and the soul wilts, as we give away our ability to make decisions for ourselves. Living in a docile state of euphemisms we are stilted, living and giving A I s permission to mother and father us, without consent. Reprogrammed slowly we become the robots of the next Century 5D tempered glass, submersion diversion, humanistic and playful insisting on a monotone experience, lost, lost, lost * (in space) Ghosting our families, friends and lovers we are having an affair with technology, a long lasting affair that is costing us ourselves. Like Phil Collins once stated in a song, " Think Twice" before you give away your cheese, to the "Ambidextrous Mice. "

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Date: 2/6/2024 7:50:00 AM
Actually a fun poem Vie. Though we are tempted, we still are able to think for ourselves. This is a reminder to be aware and beware. :)
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Date: 2/1/2024 10:04:00 AM
Someone wrote me a poem about this AI generation. I felt how cheating it is to generate a poem for someone else. I would never do it.
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Date: 1/31/2024 4:13:00 PM
this is an intense and thought-provoking read about the dangers inherent in our dependency of technology. I love the convenience of technology but sometimes wonder if mankind has thought it through for the long-term implications. Truly a wonderful masterpiece, Rose. Have a blessed evening, Sara
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Date: 1/31/2024 6:33:00 PM
Yes as much as it makes life easier for us at times, it also alienates us for each other, we need to be careful not to abuse of it, I guess Sara, Thanks for reading.
Date: 1/31/2024 9:58:00 AM
Hey Vienna, I love how your poem offers a thought-provoking exploration of the perils and pitfalls of humanity's increasing dependence on technology and artificial intelligence. Through its vivid imagery, cultural references, and incisive critique, the poem prompts readers to contemplate the ethical and existential implications of surrendering control to the machines of the future
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Date: 1/31/2024 10:21:00 AM
Dear Silent, I often have to self aware when it comes to how much time I dedicate to my computer lol, as everything in life, to the right extent it can be good too, so glad you understand my ways of thinking, have a great day :)
Date: 1/31/2024 5:26:00 AM
Ambidextrous mice is a thing? Who knew? Hey Rose this dystopian sci-fi poem really rocks. I don't fear an AI future bc I believe the end will come before things get too out of control
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Date: 1/31/2024 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Tom, every day I hear of a new advancement in technology, lol, guess part of me want to keep some things sacred, lets hope for a better future, :)

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