An Ever Expanding Abyss

I smell the coppery scent of fresh blood, and the stench of death, excrement, and piss. A soldier lies dead, his face in the mud; I never thought that war would be like this. My mind is numb; I cannot shed a tear, nor change reality—why even try? There is nothing left within me but fear, the more I live, the more I want to die. I fear the killing will never be done, for Hope has all but abandoned me. And I fight a war that cannot be won, pain and suffering are all that I see. War is an ever-expanding abyss, where mere survival often feels like bliss.
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Schiavina Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 11:18 AM
Well written! Our generation has only seen sterilized war on the screen. Thank you for pointing out the horrors of it.
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Thank you Frances, your comments are greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Mckeithan Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 1:13 AM
Very well written. It is too bad those who yearn for war are not the ones to fight it. Therefore we will always have them and the "grunt" will always bear the burden.
Pinet Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:13 AM
Thanks Oliver, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Proxenos Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Awesome - deep, penetrating frightening and so true! War is a cancer! Well penned Emile. Poetry wishes, Jennifer
Pinet Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 4:33 PM
Thanks Jennifer, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Wow. Awesome poem, Emile. I LOVE the line "the more I live, the more I want to die."
Pinet Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Hello Emile,you forgot to say that war is cruel. I think that there should be peace in the world. Have a nice day my friend.
Pinet Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Nicole Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 10:35 PM
God will never leave us, even though it may feel like it. War is emotional, and you have expressed this perfectly. Congratulations Emile, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Pinet Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Thanks Brandy, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:48 PM
I was drawn into the expressive heart of your sonnet by the depth of your heartrending imagery. Intense and emotional, Emile, a brilliant write. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Well written look at the horrors of war Emile. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! : ) xxoo
Pinet Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Raven Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Hi Emile, dropping by with my belated congratulations your Poem Of The Day honour. Much deserved. Have a wonderful Friday....Mike.
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Thanks Viadislay, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Staton Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 12:30 AM
Congrats on POTD! Very well written.
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 6:22 AM
Thanks Valerie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Messina Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Awesome Emile, congrats on your well deserved POTD honors...Happy New Year...Charlie
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 6:22 AM
Thanks Charles, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Warrior Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 5:19 PM
Congrats!!! on POTD! Emile...and Happy New Year...love & light...^WW^
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 6:21 AM
Thanks WW, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 4:36 PM
such graphic imagery Emile, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 6:21 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Doll Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Emile. Very descriptive and graphic and so well written. Warmest Wishes, Warren
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Warren, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Wanter Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:50 AM
How graphic can you get and dare to write the truth! Congratulations!!!!!
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 8:03 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Emile :) - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Sunshine, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
May Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 8:02 AM
A powerful write on the horrors of war..Congrats on POTD...
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Capitano Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:38 AM
An ugly part of 'humanity' descends to make war, the abyss the separation between head and heart. Congrats on POTD Emile, this poem is a killer.
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Thanks Phil, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Silence Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:28 AM
That last line ...
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Thanks Lost Silence, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations for POTD Emile :)
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 6:43 AM
Well done! Evocative, fabulous rhythm, and too true, Congratulations on POTD Emile. xomo
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
May Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 5:34 AM
Very well written and I hear each and every word, congratulations on POTD may God be with you my friend.
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Bobby, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gondolf Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 5:08 AM
A wonderful description of war, Emile, congrats on POTD. John
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Smith Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 4:11 AM
Nice entry Emile, congratulations on POTD honors...
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Cunningham Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 2:44 AM
No sugar coating Emile, you told it like it is.Well written. Congratulations on POTD. Tom.
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:44 AM
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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