Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

A Pseudo Love Poem

So it's back to love, gonna write about love
My favourite subject besides giggles
The thrill, the passion, the heat of the moment
Makes me wanna wiggle and jiggle

Love makes me act in very strange ways
As if I'm possessed by some demons
Always been a very prim and proper man
Really can't imagine the reason

Could be I'm reliving my teenage years
Heard you do when reaching old age
Those romps in the hay with the girl next door
When teenage hormones just raged

Well this didn't turn out the way I expected
It's void of the lovey dovey stuff
So I'm gonna sit right down and try again
Sometimes I find it real tough

© Jack Ellison 2013

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Cecilia Macfarlane October 21, 2013 at 5:36 PM Jack aka 'love demon'....this was a pleasure to read and made me giggle. Terrific write. Big hug. Jack Ellison October 21, 2013 at 6:38 PM YEE HAW... Jack aka "love demon"... yesssssssss! LOL Thanks a bunch Cecelia xoxox

Mark Peterson October 20, 2013 at 10:00 AM Something to be treasured for its lighthearted cogency. I need to return to your list of poems daily! Mark Jack Ellison October 20, 2013 at 10:03 AM You're welcome back any time my good friend! Thanks for the kind words! Cheers!

Charmaine Chircop October 19, 2013 at 10:44 AM Its amazing that you re finding it tough..cause you still manage to convey all that's 'love'...Lovely poem..I can t wait to.get old and blessed..If i get to be like you id still be at my teenage best.Have a happy weekend : ) Jack Ellison October 19, 2013 at 10:55 AM Coming from you my dear Charmaine, these are such sweet words of love and encouragement! I really must thank you for brightening my day! However don't be quick to reach this advanced age... enjoy your years and savour each one... love, Jack xoxox

Carol Eastman October 19, 2013 at 9:12 AM Dragon says if you're possessed by demons he'll come beat them up... UH Dragon... possessed means their inside him... There'll be no beating on Pappa Jack... He just needs a little more inspiration from his Cathie today... Dragon says a good chase solves everything... No Dragon... When he catches her he doesn't try to flame her with barbecue sauce... Sigh!... Well... He IS a 2 year old Dragon... This may take a few years before he understands... But that's probably for the better... LOL Jack Ellison October 19, 2013 at 9:24 AM You are the kookiest most loveable kook there is Miss Carol! LOL Have a super fantastic weekend! Love and major hugs xoxoxox

James Marshall Goff October 19, 2013 at 8:55 AM Jack...your compassion speaks volumes...that is enough....for your joy of life is real! and we all feel nurtured by your words! Thank you! jimbo Jack Ellison October 19, 2013 at 8:59 AM Wow! Those are very kind words my friend... thanks! Haven't seen you around for a while! Hope all is well with you... cheers, Jack!!!

Eileen Manassian October 19, 2013 at 7:20 AM Kenny....romping now.....are ya!!!! Naughty you.... Loved the poem. Get out of there long enough to give me a hug..... ;-) Jack Ellison October 19, 2013 at 7:29 AM You always make my day Miss Boop! A huge, major, lovey-dovey hug winging it's way across the ocean heading straight for you, dear lady! LOL Love, Kenny xoxoxox