A Promise of Heaven

A sudden glimpse took me by wonder, 

when I saw a blink to those eyes.

A little faith, a promise of forever,

I still hold tight to kiss the sky.



If  tomorrow has plan not be cursed.

I'll wipe away the pain we once had chased.

Cos' I know by then you wouldn't leave me.

We can share devotion 'til  eternity.



I once heard you swore in the night.

Under the moonlit shadow our two hearts are blind.

The wind has whispered that forever you're mine.

Shared the warmth of our souls that unite.



Too late,too long the hour has flicked.

the doorway to heaven is barely wait.

Will you be there waiting while I am on grief.

Beside your tomb I promised to love you, my fate.





** 8th Place Winner In Kelly Deschler's Contest: HEART AND SOUL**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Whiting Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 11:25 AM
I enjoyed your poem
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October 3, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Just found this on the home page, what a pleasure.
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:23 PM
hi Aiyah, . Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 10:19 AM
another rockin' win, aiyah.. sweet congrats!... huggs
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:20 PM
YeaH nette... i'm starting to believe my self... i can write!!! ^__^ thank you so much... you're the first person who inspired me to write.. ^__^
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, aiyah
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:32 AM
ThaNk YoU Dr. Ram... it's my pleasure to be part of this contest.. and my honor to have you here on my poem.. :'))
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 10:10 PM
Another nice win Aiyah, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:44 AM
ThaNk yoU , SKAT ...!!! i'm so happy to see your freshest and youngest avatar on my poem today~.. :'O)) big hugs!!! ^__^
Melugin Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 9:39 AM
I love it,!! Aiyah! Different & Delightful!
Torres Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Thank you, Chuck :)
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November 27, 2013 at 12:50 PM
- A beautiful and sweet poem, AiyaH !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 8:07 PM
thanks for the appreciation to my piece, Anne Lise :)
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