A Promise

The sun is up, another morning’s come--
The coffee’s brewed, the eggs and bacon fried,
The sky is bright, the birds are frolicsome—
On such a day, what sorrow could betide?

And yet this cheery masquerade today
Is, by my very reticence, belied,
As if I’m in some strange, absurdist play:
It all has seemed so pointless since you died.

And now I only want to grieve and hide,
Yet still, I know to do so’s a mistake—
I swore to you to go on, to abide,
And that’s a solemn promise I can’t break.

And so, my love, this further vow I’ll make:
That I’ll go on with living -- for your sake.

December 31, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Watt Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 2:58 PM
This an excellent write of melancholy loss. So down to earth and real, JP. If it is your reality, I'm sorry for your loss. To continue moving through life with such a crushing emptiness is no small feat. Kudos to you for this sonnet gem ~ John
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January 2, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Nice sonnet J.P congrats on a fine placement!
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