A Pristine Swan

Written: February 07, 2024
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It appears as if 
the world has been 
coated by a wave of 
deceitful dictums,
  where faked reality
   appears to be popular, 
an appeal of mimicry shines 
even most brilliantly. 
Anathema to blisters
induced by prickly nettle;
an artwork mustered
quivering feathers 
that cascade over 
the ivory cuticles
nestled in molten
mascarpone. 
Pearlescent opal stone,
a glimpse of the 
     azure sky, 
  a shattered spirit, 
            hollering.

Deeper within her 
skeletal corpulence
an artist grumbles 
vehemently,
leaping into the air 
while emitting a strained
sonorous tone,
primal image vanishes
and equestrian adulation 
is insufficient,
an ersatz nest of swans
      brimming with an 
             ethereal dawn.

Soprano with a 
whimsical quality
slightly etched in 
matte black tone
diploid remnants are 
a flawless fleck of 
fascinating fear,
Hollow echoes chant 
hymns hail cherubs, and 
croon carcass lullabies
Rakish Requiem for 
an unreciprocated 
magnificent opus
       swiftly spanning 
           pinewood spots, on the 
                 cusp of giving way.

As the impresario 
sags on the ladder, 
the opera curtains 
are drawn closer,
a soothing melody 
numbs her fingers 
in the process.
Mozart pianissimo is 
playing as Requiem strolls 
across the stage,
yet, he pulls it off 
and fulfills the 
task precisely.
Etchings of sequence 
on my flesh, conduct 
    an extraordinary 
       ballet of life, 
     raving smooth calm
           with melodic verses 
                 that breathe vitality.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 8:28 AM
I have no words... I can only stay gape-mouthed. Your vocabulary is simply stupendous. This poem is too deep for me to get all that you have meant. There is so much pretense and hypocrisy in this world. In such a place, poetry can breathe a lot of vitality! Simply splendid, dear friend.
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February 10, 2024 at 11:23 AM
Your poem delves into the intricacies of existence, exploring the contrast between illusion and authenticity, beauty and decay, artifice and truth. Through its vivid imagery and evocative language, it invites readers to contemplate the layers of meaning embedded within its verses... In its exploration of love, loss, and the quest for meaning, the poem invites readers to confront their own mortality and embrace the fleeting beauty of the human experience.
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February 10, 2024 at 11:23 AM
It is a testament to the enduring power of poetry to illuminate the darkest corners of the soul and inspire us to seek out moments of grace and transcendence amidst the chaos of existence.
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Ah dr sotto, couldnt have said it any better, youve delivered such a powerful poem that flows in such eloquence! I absolutely loved this and agree with every word woven especially the opening lines, it surely does seem way, this world celebrates deceit etc and i felt the lines and resonates with “ Deeper within her skeletal corpulence an artist grumbles vehemently, leaping into the air while emitting a strained sonorous tone” soul hitting really! I admire your poetic prowess, ability ro weave
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 5:04 AM
Truth in such a way that it hits the readers, using poetic techniques such as alliterations and descriptive diction! Impeccable write really! Pleasure reading you
Goldsmith Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 1:18 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful/beautiful write with a great ending. Your pen is working overtime...  Have a wonderful day..................
Buhagiar Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 10:21 AM
faked reality appears to be popular Isn't it terrible that man has damned himself? Your deep thoughts are worthy of the highest praise.
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 4:45 AM
A splendor of vocabulary --your words paint like an artist on a brilliant canvas of creativity. I am impressed with your poetic prowess, my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 10:49 PM
This is a beautiful poem that applauds a great classic. I felt to be in a front row. Thanks for a terrific write.
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