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A Pretty Pickle

It was the Annual Pickle Party To celebrate cucumbers From dark corners of the pantry They welcomed all newcomers There was Dill and Green and Sour And Bread and Butter too Mustard turned up rather late A Gherkin jar made its debut Things were going splendidly They were pickled and having fun When suddenly, all went quiet And the awkwardness begun They were in a pickle now - A stranger had crashed the party He was smooth in his white suit And smiling like the glitterati It was a sticky situation They looked about in dread Who was going to tell him... That he was a pickled egg!

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Date: 9/11/2022 8:33:00 AM
Very funny and clever Julie. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/11/2022 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Linda :) It was a fun contest topic, I enjoyed it very much.
Date: 9/11/2022 8:33:00 AM
With great suspense and lingering interest. Congratulations!
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/11/2022 11:36:00 AM
Thanks very much for your encouragement :) I had fun with this contest :)
Date: 9/11/2022 7:42:00 AM
Clever, and funny, congratulations
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/11/2022 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Terry, that's much appreciated :)
Date: 9/10/2022 6:23:00 PM
Very silly and fun. Nice work letting it rip!
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/10/2022 6:26:00 PM
Thanks Matt, I just read your poem - it was hilarious and a very worthy first place winner. Awesome work :)
Date: 9/10/2022 2:44:00 PM
lol, no one surely not me, let him thing he's the cats meow if it pleases him, thank you for joining in on the fun, congrats on your win, I really enjoyed your entry dear Julie :)
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/10/2022 4:30:00 PM
Thank you very much :) I'm delighted to have placed in your contest,especially as there were so many great funny poems.
Date: 8/14/2022 11:51:00 AM
Clever! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Julie Draper
Date: 8/14/2022 5:56:00 PM
Thanks :)

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