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A Presence Like the Wind

Through the doors of my heart Her presence enters, A trail of light, wind, and commendations Of summer escort her footsteps Sashaying the strands of her hourglass garment. Impressions stretched like sunlight on a prism, As wind whispering thru river reeds, As cool as beach wind stroking tenderly Across the hairs of my skin: Beautiful enigma, my African konga Playing your melodic rhythms on the floors of my being Opens me to wind that is you. You, my crystal wind Washing away brine that has been tied to the waters of my soul. Your eyes place me in utopia, your hands bring me succour From the muddy places that have held me in itches Your presence is a softness Chilling as the wind, woman.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/30/2024 9:39:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/9/2016 12:19:00 AM
Nice to see this one again
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Date: 6/17/2013 9:29:00 AM
@ Skat, thanks! I'm glad you like it! Thanks so much.
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Date: 6/14/2013 11:10:00 PM
wow, Onis, lovely..................SKAT
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Date: 6/13/2013 8:19:00 PM
Hello Onis, love the elements you paint through your poem...wonderful imagery at it's best. a suave shape at the end..... Always ~ LINDA
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Date: 6/17/2013 9:38:00 AM
Thank you P.D, thank you for observing the effect of the imagery in this piece. I'm glad you observed the imagery and the poem's ending: two vital aspects of this poem. I value imagery and symbolism a lot in my poetry, and ensure that they come alive in my works when necessary. These are vital elements of poetry. And of course, other literary devices like personification, metaphor, synecdoche, metonymy, irony etc, are also vital. Thanks, PD. Which of your names do you prefer being addressed by: PD or LINDA ? Once again, thanks!

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