A Prelude To Reflection

My time in the museum was a prelude to reflection, 
for in its many rooms I learned of the vicious acts of awful men
Whose pride had swallowed their humanity. I saw grim exhibits,
proof of how terrified prisoners far less fortunate than their peers 
who died from gunfire had suffered gruesome torture,amazing in its brutality.
Oh, vindictive men who think themselves victorious! 
If God Himself appeared to them, they’d likely patronize Him,
even knowing judgment time was near!

When I left the museum, the sky had darkened
as if in response to my feelings of dismay as I contemplated
how in modern times, nothing has been learned from history.
So many leaders horrific leaders of so-called civilized nations -
filthy liars with opaque motives. The wise can well see through them!

Finding myself at the opening of a park, I walked into a clearing.
An oval monolith had been erected in this beautifully spacious area.
The moon, once hidden by black clouds, suddenly emerged
as if its sole intent were to cast a lovely glow
upon this magnificent monolith. So delightful did this image appear
I wondered. . . whatever could it be?  So I approached it,
and I read the names of prisoners inscribed on its illuminated surface.
Those were the names of those sacrificed to the whims of an evil few.
Their spirits long ago had fled to the heavens.
The light of the moon now reminded me
that darkness will not prevail.

Revised for Skat's PREMIERE Contest Number 15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your fine placement in this Premiere Contest! A great story using all those required words! Hugs, Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Congrats Andrea, excellent story telling.
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Many congrats Andrea I couldn't even get started with this challenge!:-( hugs Jan xx
Neumann Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:26 PM
This is wonderful Andrea. Congrats on your win. Love Sunita
Dutta Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Congrats Andrea to win. Love
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win great story Hugs Eve
Robertson Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:06 PM
So Beautifully Written. So Sad but Beautifully True.
Neumann Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Well, you preluded more reflection for me. I like in particular the image of humans 'patronising God' and their 'opaque motives' and also the concept of 'amazing brutality. Let the moon shine.
Parker Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 7:14 PM
A write worthy of its content..good luck in the contest..just to let you know how little men have changed on Hadrain's wall in Britain there is carved in Latin " Flavorous was here"
Hagy Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 1:50 PM
You said it! Really enjoyed reading this Andrea...awesome! There will be a day of light I have no doubt...(guess it won't be this election though!)
Austin Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 11:01 AM
I watched the Republican Convention and choked because of all the hate floating on stage and through the hall. It is getting worldwide. I know a gal who is full of love. Her name is Andrea Dietrich.
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 11:42 AM
thanks, Daver. I got that same sense watching Trump. He is feeding the people with what they want. I hated watching them, but I was able to see his appeal to them and it was a very scary thing to see.
Y. Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Hi Andrea, You composed a good piece using "Shadow's" words. The last two lines were subtle yet powerful " The light of the moon reminded me that darkness will not prevail ". Excellent job. I'm sure I will see it on the winner's list. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 3:39 AM
Brilliant Andrea...this is sure to be a winner! 7 ; )
La France Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Andrea, well done on this very difficult challenge, 7 ~
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