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A Prefect Tie

I wonder why
Someone gave me a noose so early
I was never ready to die
All I wanted was to live, play and cry.

2nd gradeanxietygrowthhurtfree verse

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rhaya artlyy

September 14, 2026 at 10:34 AM

I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin

January 11, 2025 at 4:55 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.

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