A predator came calling

We forgot to close the coop and a
predator came calling.
We became entangled by his loop
and now the government he's uphauling.
We let a nemesis on the premises,
so billionaires he's installing..
Slashing and gutting Federal agencies.
What will survive this mauling?
The chaos and the casualties,
so tragic and appalling..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 6/23/2025 10:09:00 AM
Nancy, your poem is a stark political allegory warning of the consequences of public complacency, depicting a predatory takeover that leads to chaos, corruption, and the dismantling of vital institutions.
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Date: 4/8/2025 8:06:00 PM
Dear Nancy, how powerful are your words. I understand the sentiment behind it. Since you are from the United States, I know, whom you are referring to. This fear of the predator, I feel is shared by most of the people of the country. We are all going through bad times. Let God save us. Great penning!
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 4/9/2025 7:02:00 AM
Hi Valsa, It's my pleasure to hear from you. It's been a long stretch of not being able to write as freely as I used to and the only thing I want to write are political but no one really wants to hear my angst. I totally agree that these are globally dark times. Keep writing. You are very talented and bring a positive light with your words.
Date: 3/26/2025 8:25:00 AM
your poem sent a chill thru my bones These are scary times
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 4/9/2025 7:05:00 AM
Hi William, Sorry to be late in responding to your comment which was most appreciated. I totally agree with you and I wish I had some thing positive to share on the site with others but I don't, so I've muted my muse. Blessings to you
Date: 3/20/2025 8:36:00 AM
Such brilliant wordplay and how powerful is your poem, i am scared for the world and anyone that experience what youv described here in such a profound manner! Its so good to read you today dear nancy, i hope you are doing well! I admire how you always speak your mind poetically, i have so much respect for those that express themselves respectfully. Sending you light always.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 4/9/2025 7:03:00 AM
Dear Ink, Thanks for your kind words and thoughts. Always appreciate hearing from an accomplished poet like yourself.
Date: 3/15/2025 9:00:00 AM
Keith, Let me briefly reiterate this. A 50% cut to the Department of Education will greatly impact children with special needs who need that extra support of speech therapists, augmented communication devises, physical therapy, aids in the class room and so on. It may be too soon for some to realize but this is not a scare tactic.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 3/15/2025 3:25:00 PM
He’s not cutting funding for programs. He’s eliminating the pen pushers and the activists who push their woke social justice ideologies, not the services on the front line. He’s handing the savings over to the states to administer instead of a big inefficient federal bureaucracy in Washington. Doing the same thing with FEMA. It all makes sense to me.
Date: 3/14/2025 8:33:00 PM
Hilarious! Unintentionally of course. Yep, that old socialist goat, Bernie Sanders, will save the world. Thanks for the giggle, that’s priceless! A fave.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 3/15/2025 5:57:00 AM
Yep, that evil billionaire Elon Musk. He’s currently rescuing stranded astronauts on the International Space Station after that other evil billionaire, D J Trump, asked him to. He gets those federal contracts because he’s a genius who gets things done. Spare me the veterans and special needs fearmongering - that’s not happening. If you think running 2 trillion dollar deficits is okay you must live among the unicorns.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 3/15/2025 5:20:00 AM
Hi Keith, I don't see anything "radical" about supporting our public sector workers who only make up 4.3% of the overall Federal budget. I guess there aren't any federal employees in your family? My problem is with how it has been done by an unelected billionaire who currently has made a lot of money from his 52 federal contracts, 11.8 billion while services to our veterans health care and adults with special needs etc. etc. will be reduced.
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Date: 3/14/2025 8:34:00 PM
What is it about big bloated bureaucratic government you liberals love so much?
Date: 3/14/2025 4:56:00 PM
Very well expressed, sad days indeed.
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Date: 3/14/2025 4:19:00 PM
Hi Nancy. Too few are doing too little. I’ve never known our country to be so divided since 1865. “…nemesis on the premises…” great line.
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Date: 3/14/2025 2:46:00 PM
Of course it doesn't matter to trumpty and musky rat they are mega rich, the impact on the average folk out there is massive. forget make America great again - its god help America and the rest of the world:-( hugs Jan xx
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 3/14/2025 3:12:00 PM
Hi Jan, My sister who lives in New England told me that Senator Bernie Sanders is going around the country speaking at town meetings. It's time for this country to wake up and smell the burning coffee. Thanks for your visit and hugs to you..
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