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A Precious Jewel

"i carry your heart with me (i carry it in my heart) i am never without it (anywhere i go you go..." ee Cummings In the silent wondrous wonders of my yearning, you appeared as a lasting vision burned deep into my eyes In the flaming quiet of this moment, my heart trembled and love rose like a glorious glow breaking the darkened horizon of my yesterday's loneliness like a rising sun that splayed warmth so timeless as to nourish my soul and lead me to escape the tideless shores of emptiness where my lost barren heart had dwelled for so long Before the world turned and your gift of love begets love to leave an afterimage in my heart Where promises are laid upon the altar of life and poems were etched into my soul to be read like a haunting melody from the lips of your passions that need to be held like a precious jewel...forever 11/1/19 contest Writing Challenge, November-Some Kind of Love Poetry Contest sponsor Dear Heart-Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 11/19/2019 10:02:00 PM
Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
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Date: 11/19/2019 1:48:00 AM
Hi Frederic Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/18/2019 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 11/18/2019 4:32:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem and the music is lovely too !
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Date: 11/18/2019 1:53:00 PM
- Congratulations on a lovely 2nd place in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2019 2:56:00 PM
The transformation love makes on a person is incredible as is the loss of it. Very meaningful poem, Frederic. :D
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Date: 11/2/2019 9:05:00 AM
i love this song...loved the movie (ghost) your words go perfect with that kind of love, the love most only dream of ever achieving....great penning Frederic...that last stanza displays that love perfectly...simply gorgeous write.... hugs :)
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Date: 11/2/2019 6:23:00 AM
this is such a beautiful poem... full of wisdom..
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Date: 11/1/2019 10:03:00 PM
Beautifully written Frederic :)
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