A Prayer For the Elderly

I prayed today for the elderly
They long to hear for you to say
Words of love and words of praise
With acts of kindness they once gave.

And if you’re going by their way
They’d like for you to stop and pay
A visit where you both can play
Disregard what you may.

Before their heads they shall lay
At night before the sun and it’s ray
When they bow their heads as they pray
Praying you and everyone will be okay.

Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vaso Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Brenda, this is so beautiful and shows what a kind heart you have! :)
Sage Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:24 AM
excellent write Brenda
Chuan Seng Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 12:36 AM
Wow, a lovely enough poem... Speaking up for the old ones.. Yes they'll appreciate company.. Thanks to you, hope there'll be many!
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Beautiful poem for tribute for the elderly, Elizabeth. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:42 AM
A beautiful prayer Brenda it resonates with me so much as my mum is now in a care home:-( hugs Jan xx
Sergi Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:38 AM
A very warm poem, Brenda. Congratulations on your POTD!
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January 3, 2016 at 9:14 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Brenda - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 3, 2016 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your Poem of the Day reminding everyone that the past also belongs in the future.
Promise Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 11:05 AM
The elderly who once served, who gave and also prayed for others, need prayer, especially in their helpless states! Thanks for sharing and God bless.
B. Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 11:57 PM
Love this prayer :) Thank you!
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