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A Pot of Gold

hues rainbows arched spectrum prismatic glow purple, magenta, yellow, pink and lime Leprauchans leave pots of gold at the base foolish men search chase mirage without end

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Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 6/17/2011 9:44:00 AM

wow...please clear me on this

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/15/2011 11:46:00 AM

WOW! Very well done and written, Diane! If this is for the contest, I wish you good luck. Should be no problem with this meaningful entry. Best wishe, Caroline.

George Aul

Date: 6/15/2011 9:30:00 AM

A very good write; unfortunately, I still chase some mirages out there ... thanks for the nice comment........George

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2011 7:03:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry Diane. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. Wishing you joy and sunshine in your life that you might find inspiration to carry on with your writing. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2011 10:23:00 PM

excellent write on the elusive pot of gold, Diane!

Jancarl Campi

Date: 6/14/2011 10:21:00 PM

Thanks for your comments on my haikus. I like this poem lots. Thanks for sharing your work with us, Jancarl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/14/2011 6:44:00 PM

Wonderful images creating a pleasant and enticing picture, Diane

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/14/2011 11:59:00 AM

Ah, this is about leprauchauns hiding their pot of gold... yes, but I think more about this message for us humans,a very nice one Diane. thanks for your sweet comments on my 'horse' poem. love, gautami

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/14/2011 11:45:00 AM

Yes, Diane, we are always chasing rainbows but because they are reflections, we'll never reach the end. Cool poem! Hope you enter it in Chris's contest. Love, Carolyn