Rhoma Em Poet Dodoitsu

A Positive Poem

crystal waters line the shore
festive as love potion’s dew
gushing words echo birds’ call--
like cool serenade

mounds of earth-clay  warm
nighttime’s ride through sand castles
as bubbles fly with lip-talks--
dash of rendezvous


Contest by Elly Waterouse
A Positive Poem
June 21, 2014

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Sara Kendrick June 30, 2014 at 4:37 PM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara

Nette Onclaud June 29, 2014 at 4:28 PM you certainly rocked this one, rhoma... more power to you and big congrats with huggs

Casarah Nance June 28, 2014 at 7:43 PM Love the line "festive as love potions dew" great job writing a winning poem :)

Pandita Sietesantos June 28, 2014 at 3:23 PM Hi Rhoma, this is such a beautiful write with wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win!

Arlene Smith June 28, 2014 at 1:20 PM beautiful, Rhoma... congrats on a great win.. hugs.. Arlene

Dr.Ram Mehta June 28, 2014 at 9:56 AM It's a nice song on the positiveness in life, congrats, Rhoma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 28, 2014 at 8:47 AM Great one Rhoma ! Congrats on huge win!

Mohan Chutani June 28, 2014 at 4:25 AM A beautiful poem RHOMA, on the positivity gerated by the elements on the shore. Congrats for the win. Mohan