A Pond's Melody
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June-9- 2025
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~ Placed First~
A pool in the shade.
water torn with small ripples.
goldfish darted up and down,
in limpid water.
when the carp leaped suddenly,
I heard the pond's melody.
Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2025
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