Krishnanand Guptar Poet Choka

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Placed Fourth in :  A Pond`s Melody Poetry Contest   of Nette Onclaud

A Pond's Melody

                                             A Pond's Melody

                                      Purrs of swimming swans   
                                 Drumming of fish with bladders 
                                        Rustling of water lilies      
                                          Rippling of waters    
                                      Stir up a pond`s melody,
                                      A dulcet boon to the ears.

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Valsa George June 11, 2025 at 9:17 PM Beautiful orchestration of various sounds into a beautiful melody! Congratulations Krish on your placement. Krishnanand Guptar June 12, 2025 at 11:48 AM Thank you Valsa for appreciating this write and your kind wishes. Cheers.

Rob Carmack June 11, 2025 at 8:01 AM Some interesting word choices here. Congrats on your placement. Krishnanand Guptar June 12, 2025 at 12:14 PM Thank you friend for appreciating the write and your kind wishes. Cheers

Kim Rodrigues June 11, 2025 at 7:27 AM Unique sounds of swans, fish and water lilies. Congrats! Krishnanand Guptar June 12, 2025 at 12:02 PM Thanks a lot friend for appreciating the write and your kind wishes. Have a cheerful day.