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6/8/2025 Nette Onclaud's Show Me A Choka

yellow duckies slosh a fishing line rewinding blue sky’s skipping in the pond whistles the green frog a tan boy puppy puddles small gray cloud joins with splish-splash

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Valsa George

Date: 6/14/2025 8:51:00 PM

This is absolutely beautiful. All images are equally striking. "a fishing line rewinding"-- simply lovely! Congratulations Kim on your great win.

Howard Kerr

Date: 6/11/2025 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations Kim, This is an outstanding work in every respect. Vivid imagery and imaginative word choice rounds off a superior entry. Many thanks for your comment on my work Howard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2025 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Howard!

Rob Carmack

Date: 6/11/2025 7:37:00 AM

You weaved this one well especially the last two lines.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2025 7:47:00 AM

Thank you, Rob!

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 6/10/2025 11:51:00 PM

Congrats.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2025 7:04:00 AM

Thank you, Maclawrence!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/10/2025 10:54:00 PM

A vivid cadence of melody in a pond. Congratulations, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2025 7:04:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal!

JCB Brul

Date: 6/9/2025 3:34:00 PM

I see myself beside the pond enjoying the cinematic imagery you created there. I love it! A FAVE for me. Stay creative dear Kim. ^___^JCB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 4:34:00 PM

Thank you kindly for the fave, JCB!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/9/2025 12:21:00 PM

Hello Kim Rodrigues, I love your imagination. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2025 12:57:00 PM

Hello Kim, you are welcome. .Enjoy your day .Hugs. /Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/9/2025 3:26:00 AM

You are always a delight to read. Great poetry entry. Poetry hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 6:37:00 AM

I appreciate you, my friend! Thank You!

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/9/2025 1:12:00 AM

Very nice Choka Kim. Great imagery. Good one for the contest

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 3:11:00 AM

Thank you, Oliver!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/8/2025 9:12:00 PM

A lovely memorabilia, or so that's the feelings it creates <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 3:11:00 AM

Thank you, Paige :)

David Crandall

Date: 6/8/2025 8:41:00 PM

What a pleasant day in the pond! A kid's song just popped into my head, "little white duck, swimmin' in the watta - little white duck, doin' what he oughtta"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 3:10:00 AM

LOL…love that that song popped in your head!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/8/2025 8:10:00 PM

A great mood, I'm guessing, produces this splish-splash serendipity. Here's to FUN! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 8:22:00 PM

Feeling whimsical! :) Thanks!