A Pond’s Melody

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6/8/2025 Nette Onclaud's Show Me A Choka

yellow duckies slosh a fishing line rewinding blue sky’s skipping in the pond whistles the green frog a tan boy puppy puddles small gray cloud joins with splish-splash

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/9/2025 3:26:00 AM

You are always a delight to read. Great poetry entry. Poetry hugs.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/9/2025 1:12:00 AM

Very nice Choka Kim. Great imagery. Good one for the contest

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 3:11:00 AM

Thank you, Oliver!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/8/2025 9:12:00 PM

A lovely memorabilia, or so that's the feelings it creates <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 3:11:00 AM

Thank you, Paige :)

David Crandall

Date: 6/8/2025 8:41:00 PM

What a pleasant day in the pond! A kid's song just popped into my head, "little white duck, swimmin' in the watta - little white duck, doin' what he oughtta"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 3:10:00 AM

LOL…love that that song popped in your head!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/8/2025 8:10:00 PM

A great mood, I'm guessing, produces this splish-splash serendipity. Here's to FUN! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 8:22:00 PM

Feeling whimsical! :) Thanks!