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6/8/2025 Nette Onclaud's Show Me A Choka

A Pond’s Melody

yellow duckies slosh
a fishing line rewinding
blue sky’s skipping in the pond
whistles the green frog
a tan boy puppy puddles
small gray cloud joins with splish-splash

waterchoka

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Valsa George

June 14, 2025 at 8:51 PM

This is absolutely beautiful. All images are equally striking. "a fishing line rewinding"-- simply lovely! Congratulations Kim on your great win.

Howard Kerr

June 11, 2025 at 8:08 AM

Congratulations Kim, This is an outstanding work in every respect. Vivid imagery and imaginative word choice rounds off a superior entry. Many thanks for your comment on my work Howard

Kim Rodrigues

June 11, 2025 at 10:59 AM

Thank you so much, Howard!

Rob Carmack

June 11, 2025 at 7:37 AM

You weaved this one well especially the last two lines.

Kim Rodrigues

June 11, 2025 at 7:47 AM

Thank you, Rob!

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

June 10, 2025 at 11:51 PM

Congrats.

Kim Rodrigues

June 11, 2025 at 7:04 AM

Thank you, Maclawrence!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

June 10, 2025 at 10:54 PM

A vivid cadence of melody in a pond. Congratulations, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

June 11, 2025 at 7:04 AM

Thank you, Subimal!

JC Brul

June 9, 2025 at 3:34 PM

I see myself beside the pond enjoying the cinematic imagery you created there. I love it! A FAVE for me. Stay creative dear Kim. ^___^JCB

Kim Rodrigues

June 9, 2025 at 4:34 PM

Thank you kindly for the fave, JCB!

Darlene De Beaulieu

June 9, 2025 at 12:21 PM

Hello Kim Rodrigues, I love your imagination. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

June 12, 2025 at 12:57 PM

Hello Kim, you are welcome. .Enjoy your day .Hugs. /Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues

June 9, 2025 at 12:23 PM

Thank you, Darlene!

Victor Buhagiar

June 9, 2025 at 3:26 AM

You are always a delight to read. Great poetry entry. Poetry hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

June 9, 2025 at 6:37 AM

I appreciate you, my friend! Thank You!

Oliver Mckeithan

June 9, 2025 at 1:12 AM

Very nice Choka Kim. Great imagery. Good one for the contest

Kim Rodrigues

June 9, 2025 at 3:11 AM

Thank you, Oliver!

Paige Hind

June 8, 2025 at 9:12 PM

A lovely memorabilia, or so that's the feelings it creates <3

Kim Rodrigues

June 9, 2025 at 3:11 AM

Thank you, Paige :)

David Crandall

June 8, 2025 at 8:41 PM

What a pleasant day in the pond! A kid's song just popped into my head, "little white duck, swimmin' in the watta - little white duck, doin' what he oughtta"

Kim Rodrigues

June 9, 2025 at 3:10 AM

LOL…love that that song popped in your head!