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A Pond's Melody

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Choke contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud June 2025



lying on lilies
lazy and luxurious 
feed my senses curious 
listen to my pond
drips and drops a harmony
rain on tadpole colony

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Rob Carmack

Date: 6/11/2025 8:06:00 AM

I like how you approached this. Got me thinking a lily as a pillow top mattress with the pond as the orchestra and the tadpoles in the audience with me. Congrats Crystol.

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/11/2025 11:10:00 PM

Nice to hear from you, thanks so much! Xo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/11/2025 7:28:00 AM

Cute one! Congrats!

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/11/2025 11:10:00 PM

Thank you Kim xo

Vanya Evangeline

Date: 6/9/2025 6:07:00 AM

Lovely imageries of tadpoles and lilies, Crystol. Good luck on the contest~

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2025 8:28:00 AM

Thank you! Xo

CayCay Jennings

Date: 6/8/2025 9:29:00 PM

Aren't choka's fun to write? Nette's given us a lot of itty-bitty forms to play with. Yours is charming with sounds, sights and movements. Drops a harmony is priceless! Poetry hugs ... CayCay (notice I restrained my enthusiasm)

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2025 8:28:00 AM

Yesss!!! I will be writing more of these! Never restrain for me! You be you... all of you! You are wonderful! Xo

David Crandall

Date: 6/8/2025 7:58:00 PM

cute, I can hear and and see it

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2025 8:27:00 AM

That's high praise! Ty! Xo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/8/2025 12:35:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "A Pond's Melody" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2025 8:26:00 AM

Thanks! Xo