A Pond's Melody



lying on lilies
lazy and luxurious 
feed my senses curious 
listen to my pond
drips and drops a harmony
rain on tadpole colony

naturechoka

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Rob Carmack

June 11, 2025 at 8:06 AM

I like how you approached this. Got me thinking a lily as a pillow top mattress with the pond as the orchestra and the tadpoles in the audience with me. Congrats Crystol.

Crystol Woods

June 11, 2025 at 11:10 PM

Nice to hear from you, thanks so much! Xo

Kim Rodrigues

June 11, 2025 at 7:28 AM

Cute one! Congrats!

Crystol Woods

June 11, 2025 at 11:10 PM

Thank you Kim xo

Vanya Evangeline

June 9, 2025 at 6:07 AM

Lovely imageries of tadpoles and lilies, Crystol. Good luck on the contest~

Crystol Woods

June 9, 2025 at 8:28 AM

Thank you! Xo

CayCay Godwin

June 8, 2025 at 9:29 PM

Aren't choka's fun to write? Nette's given us a lot of itty-bitty forms to play with. Yours is charming with sounds, sights and movements. Drops a harmony is priceless! Poetry hugs ... CayCay (notice I restrained my enthusiasm)

Crystol Woods

June 9, 2025 at 8:28 AM

Yesss!!! I will be writing more of these! Never restrain for me! You be you... all of you! You are wonderful! Xo