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Choke contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud June 2025
lying on lilies lazy and luxurious feed my senses curious listen to my pond drips and drops a harmony rain on tadpole colony

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Date: 6/11/2025 8:06:00 AM
I like how you approached this. Got me thinking a lily as a pillow top mattress with the pond as the orchestra and the tadpoles in the audience with me. Congrats Crystol.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/11/2025 11:10:00 PM
Nice to hear from you, thanks so much! Xo
Date: 6/11/2025 7:28:00 AM
Cute one! Congrats!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/11/2025 11:10:00 PM
Thank you Kim xo
Date: 6/9/2025 6:07:00 AM
Lovely imageries of tadpoles and lilies, Crystol. Good luck on the contest~
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2025 8:28:00 AM
Thank you! Xo
Date: 6/8/2025 9:29:00 PM
Aren't choka's fun to write? Nette's given us a lot of itty-bitty forms to play with. Yours is charming with sounds, sights and movements. Drops a harmony is priceless! Poetry hugs ... CayCay (notice I restrained my enthusiasm)
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2025 8:28:00 AM
Yesss!!! I will be writing more of these! Never restrain for me! You be you... all of you! You are wonderful! Xo
Date: 6/8/2025 7:58:00 PM
cute, I can hear and and see it
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2025 8:27:00 AM
That's high praise! Ty! Xo
Date: 6/8/2025 12:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "A Pond's Melody" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2025 8:26:00 AM
Thanks! Xo

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