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A Poisonous Union

Add colour to a bunch of expensive waste, Its still rubbish to rescue a prey from its determined predator create an exit in one cubicle is a hungry snake and a well nurtured fish to suggest fairness in this scene, we stubbornly close it one is feasted upon for another to have a nice dish yet for political correctness we look away to the opposite.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Vee Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 10:41 PM
Absloutly powerful! I see why this has been read 2000 times, and it should be read by everyone, everywhere. I don't have the words to compliment you. I am humbled by your work.
Shaw Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 2:51 AM
Hello Funom, I was very curious to read this poem, simply by the fact that it had been read over 2000 times in a very short space of time. Well now I know; your words and phrasing are wonderful, not only that, but perceptive and true of the world we live in. I work for a local council authority in England and would love to be able to post something like your poem on my Chief Executives BLOG page. Thank you for sharing your poem, congratulations and kind regards, Kevin
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Thank you so much Kevin Shaw... Please feel free and post it anywhere
Nusker Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:30 PM
You nailed it with the last line.
Makama Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words
Poteet Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Love the title, Funom. Color does nothing to cover up the waste, especially wasted wealth. There's hope if we can only get away from merely being politically correct and get to the heart of the matter. Well-said...keep writing.
Makama Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:40 AM
Once again, thank you so much for your kind words
Roper Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Very profound write and well said, Funom, but so very sad that it exists in our world. 7 `~* Hugs Eve
Makama Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:41 AM
Thank you very much for your uplifting words
Burch Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:53 AM
Indeed!! Profound conundrum! Well done...Funom. Deb
Makama Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:41 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:29 AM
We, do, oh how we do, and how I know it that it happens... Wonderfully expressed in so few lines....
Makama Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:44 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words
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