A Poisonous Union

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Add colour to a bunch of expensive waste, Its still rubbish to rescue a prey from its determined predator create an exit in one cubicle is a hungry snake and a well nurtured fish to suggest fairness in this scene, we stubbornly close it one is feasted upon for another to have a nice dish yet for political correctness we look away to the opposite.

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Jay Vee

Date: 7/12/2017 10:41:00 PM

Absloutly powerful! I see why this has been read 2000 times, and it should be read by everyone, everywhere. I don't have the words to compliment you. I am humbled by your work.

Kevin Shaw

Date: 6/21/2017 2:51:00 AM

Hello Funom, I was very curious to read this poem, simply by the fact that it had been read over 2000 times in a very short space of time. Well now I know; your words and phrasing are wonderful, not only that, but perceptive and true of the world we live in. I work for a local council authority in England and would love to be able to post something like your poem on my Chief Executives BLOG page. Thank you for sharing your poem, congratulations and kind regards, Kevin

Funom Makama
Date: 6/30/2017 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much Kevin Shaw... Please feel free and post it anywhere

Afzal Nusker

Date: 3/6/2017 10:30:00 PM

You nailed it with the last line.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/6/2017 8:18:00 PM

Love the title, Funom. Color does nothing to cover up the waste, especially wasted wealth. There's hope if we can only get away from merely being politically correct and get to the heart of the matter. Well-said...keep writing.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:40:00 AM

Once again, thank you so much for your kind words