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A Point In Life

I have reached a point in life, Where love and hate both subside, In dilemma I live, A life with no drill. One error comes after another, All the regrets bind me together, Life seems like a never-ending loop, Just wondering when I will finally breakthrough.

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Date: 9/20/2023 9:33:00 AM
Breakthrough is a dream. Life will always be ups and downs and has been for many millenniums. Nice write komal
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 9/29/2023 9:51:00 AM
True that.....Thank you so much Tom!! Glad you stopped by :)
Date: 9/14/2023 3:41:00 PM
Deep thoughts, my friend. Your authentic self will thrive when the time is right. Be strong, live long, Komal. A poet friend in Texas, Bill p.s. I see below that you are busy with school. We look forward to your return to posting your fine poetry and visiting and comment on our poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 9/16/2023 5:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill! It's always good to see you here...Yes I have been quite busy with my school, but will surely try to write more and read your amazing poems! Have a great day :)
Date: 6/14/2023 12:53:00 PM
Great to see you writing to understand the battle we all face my dear friend, definitely not getting any easier for you all coming up, great poem of awareness to see the love vs hate, light vs dark within, blessed are those which recognize this and are revealed to distinguish between them both, : )
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 6/15/2023 1:20:00 AM
Ha! Thank you Stephan, I haven't been getting time to write nd upload my poems as yet, because there is too much of workload as my studies have begun. Glad you stopped by today. Thank you so much! :)

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