A Point In Life

I have reached a point in life,
Where love and hate both subside,
In dilemma I live,
A life with no drill.

One error comes after another,
All the regrets bind me together,
Life seems like a never-ending loop,
Just wondering when I will finally breakthrough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Hello Komal Walimbe, When erros happen , we keep on trying until we qre happy with thew outcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Walimbe Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 9:26 AM
Hello Darlene, That's true indeed ,glad you stopped by!! :)
Agustin Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 8:56 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Walimbe Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 9:24 AM
Thank you for your kind words and for sharing such a beautiful verse ! Glad you stopped by :)
Baker Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Deep thoughts, my friend. Your authentic self will thrive when the time is right. Be strong, live long, Komal. A poet friend in Texas, Bill p.s. I see below that you are busy with school. We look forward to your return to posting your fine poetry and visiting and comment on our poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Walimbe Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Thank you so much Bill! It's always good to see you here...Yes I have been quite busy with my school, but will surely try to write more and read your amazing poems! Have a great day :)
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June 14, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Great to see you writing to understand the battle we all face my dear friend, definitely not getting any easier for you all coming up, great poem of awareness to see the love vs hate, light vs dark within, blessed are those which recognize this and are revealed to distinguish between them both, : )
Walimbe Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 1:20 AM
Ha! Thank you Stephan, I haven't been getting time to write nd upload my poems as yet, because there is too much of workload as my studies have begun. Glad you stopped by today. Thank you so much! :)
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