A Poet's Song

I remember when we used to meet,
Under the arbor on a cushioned seat;
It was always such a special time,
When I held your hands in mine.

Your eyes were that soft blue gray,
That lit my skies throughout the day;
But they changed into amethyst,
When I sought your mouth and we kissed.

Your tangled hair that ran riot,
Without a ribbon there to tie it;
Tumbles down like streams of gold,
Like a rhyme so softly told.

I remember well your sweet perfume,
That reminded me of the rose's bloom;
When your little feet to me came,
Running soft in spring time’s rain.

The color of the dress you wore,
Crimson red I could not ignore;
Around your neck the snowy lace,
That framed so well your lovely face.

Could we bring back the dream again,
Does the memory hold too much pain?
Has passion past now gone away,
Has love thought it cannot stay?

Just know dear how my heart will break,
The grieving is for both our sake;
But it will find a song I know,
For poet's hearts are broken so.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/20/2012 1:17:00 PM
Bittersweet, and lovingly rendered. '...tumbles down like streams of gold, like a rhyme so softly told,' exquisite! with your hallmark couplet rhyming and flow. A piece to touch, feel, taste and smell!!! :)
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Date: 5/13/2012 5:16:00 AM
Time is the enemy of love.
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Date: 9/15/2011 1:55:00 PM
Yes they are. I've often said that the difference between a philosopher and a poet is that while a philosopher struggles with the truth, the poet embraces it. So when a poet suffers the broken heart he is twice betrayed both by love and by his belief in the truth of the union.
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:30:00 PM
The poet's song is never sung. It's silence is forever young. The secrets of the unadorned. For private pleasures may be scorned. The brave will flee to solemn caverns. While fools will bellow in rancid taverns. So when the sun shines on the day. May it find that love has come to stay.
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Date: 8/13/2011 7:02:00 AM
a glowing plea that mesmerizes the reader with such fluid imagery, elizabeth... classic! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:20:00 AM
Hi Elizabeth Enjoyed this poem. Have a great weekend
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Date: 8/12/2011 10:38:00 AM
enjoyed this write. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on mine Elizabeth. Have a great weekend...TAH
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:50:00 PM
I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Turn off the tension. Have a wonderful evening Elizabeth. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:08:00 PM
pretty and poetic Elizabeth. Very nicely done.
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Date: 8/11/2011 9:28:00 PM
Surely I can relate dear poetess, this is such a lovely write; Well-done too.
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Date: 8/11/2011 8:11:00 PM
Shivers here babe, emotions slave, but in the mind we often grasp, the tender words, the little laugh, when love was sweet n brave :)
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:25:00 PM
a romantic tale in poetry elizabeth of heart ache and heart break but luv.. the key element making the world revolve.. excellent rhyme luv..
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:09:00 PM
Enjoyed the free flow in this write Elizebeth, good to read your words today..
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:23:00 PM
yes i am with david what was this poem about? it was a beautiful poem and well written. thank you for commenting on wee little puppy, i just love all animals and feel for them when they died, I sometimes can feel what they do and understand them more than i can humans.
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:23:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your very interesting writing today Elizabeth. Thank you for posting your poetry for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 2:08:00 PM
This one went inot my faves Liz. Beautifully worded. Great rhyme and rhythm. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/11/2011 1:51:00 PM
Elizabeth, this is such a joy to read. It's simply delightful and sad. I so love it, what a beauty to share :)
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Date: 8/11/2011 1:51:00 PM
Yes, I guess we've all been there... Lovely write, Elizabeth
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Date: 8/11/2011 12:41:00 PM
such satin feel to this one, elizabeth... love the way you glide, sooo implicity remdered! smashing! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/11/2011 12:11:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Love Much of Your Beauties Verse My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Beautiful Elizabeth! = Tis Has A Classical Quality & Often Flows As A River Wonderfully. == And As For Love Itself *^_^* If It Pure & From One's Deepest Truest Heart Then, May It Find A Blessing From Above, Wrapped Amid Divinities Love; Beautiful Painting!” === My Love & Warmth Unto Your Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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