A Poet's Heaven

Among the classic poets of fine rhyme - are balladeers who weave with lines a tale, the satirists and bards of the sublime, and troubadours who sing a light rondel. I close my eyes, imagining I'd dwell among them all - a poetess in bliss. Could heaven be as wonderful as this? With modern poets too I would commune; With friends I'd known on earth I'd reminisce . . . and poetry would flow - celestial boon! A Dizain with rhyme scheme: a. b. a. b. b. c. c. d. c. d
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Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Sweet poem, Andrea.
Duet Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 1:11 PM
What a lovely daydream! Heavenly poem, Andrea.
May Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 7:19 AM
Beautiful write Andrea...Congrats on your win..
Babcock Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 12:10 PM
Well done, you are go good at all these different forms . I sure have lots of work to do learning some of them. I tend to do certain types and should really spread my wings. love phyl
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 3:25 PM
It sweetly flows, growing, glowing, and then to heaven's space where I must wait for more.
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:43 AM
Andrea ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*
La France Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Andrea, you are an impressive poet yourself and I was intrigued with your deep and vivid poem. I am fascinated by the poets of old, love looking at old and tattered poetry books and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
Ramage Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 9:16 PM
Well done Andrea. I've been away from the site for awhile but I see your skill and ability has only improved. Congrats on your well deserved win. Lee
Arowolo Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 4:13 PM
nice presentation,Great write...Kudos to you..Congrats on your win...
Mutindi Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea! Grace
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 12:02 AM
wowowowow Andie.... :)! I'm seeing also myself in this poem.. :)! I never thought that I'll have some beautiful friends here in soup that are wow in poetry and more.. :)! BIG KUDOS!!/olive eloisa.. :)! a fave!
May Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Very nicely written, Andrea. A poet's soul can sometimes experience heaven while creating. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Gorelick Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 1:53 PM
lLovely, just lovely. Congrats. BG
Chutani Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 8:25 AM
poetic heaven, lovely take Andrea. Congrats for top win. Mohan
Cooper Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Congrats on the win Andrea, a great poem. love shane xxx
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 7:21 AM
Congrats on win Andrea Darling>rajat
Relish Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 7:05 AM
Beautiful especially the last line... congrats Andrea... a well deserving win... hugs,nad!
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 6:28 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea :-) Hugs Jan xx
Mehta Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 5:17 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Andrea
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Beautifully crafted Andrea:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Not many can write as well as you my fair lady. This is lovely! I hope to see it high up on the winner's list where it belongs.
J.T. Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Very well done -JT
D. Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:55 AM
a lovely write and definitely a piece of heaven for sure but now you got me thinking so I have to ask you to write a poem called a poets hell just to indulge my curiosity
Mcdaid Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 8:03 PM
beautifully crafted excellent pen andrea
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