Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

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A Poets Dream

All poets are dreamers and writers
Who weave life into verse and rhyme 
Verse into heartfelt contemplations
The heart desires
Longs
For attention
A poet will expose himself to his great lengths
His ink shall flow like emotions dancing on a page
He may need to erase his thoughts, annul his dreams
Thus his pencil stands guard and erect
Love is erased with little effect
He scribbles his musings onto blank pages
Wondering if maybe the lass he so dreams
Will sit upon his pencil
Reading his very confessions of love

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Pandita Sietesantos May 12, 2015 at 4:22 PM This brilliant piece is yet another example of why you are one of our premier poets! It deserves a "7" - BRAVO! Arthur Vaso May 12, 2015 at 10:46 PM Oh Pandita, I will have to increase your pay with those kind words!!!!!

Funom Makama April 20, 2015 at 8:11 AM great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7 Arthur Vaso May 12, 2015 at 10:45 PM Thank you Funom, you are very kind as usual!

Eve Roper March 30, 2015 at 9:03 PM What is nice about a pencil is the eraser, it can move words around until your true feelings show. Blessings sir and a 7 Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:26 PM I never thought of my pencil quite that way! hugs!

Kp Nunez March 30, 2015 at 8:38 PM A deeply contemplative write, Arthur. A poet can't help him/herselfself, but to write what he/she feels especially if it's about the love he/she has for someone. A 7. Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:25 PM Thank you Kim, I couldn't agree more!

Robert Lindley March 30, 2015 at 1:29 PM Not just romantic verse but deeply profound verse as well. A7 and this is a writers gem my friend. Bravooooooo!!! Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:25 PM Thank you Kindly Robert!

Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 3:51 AM Wonderful emotions in your poem my friend. Oh I do hope your pencil never gets blunt - boy you do have such a big one for a girl to perch on Arthur! Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison April 4, 2015 at 2:39 PM lol:-) hugs Jan xx Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:24 PM LOL thanks Jan, and I completely agree with your brilliant observations!

Amor Otong March 29, 2015 at 11:31 PM In writing you have to confess your feelings and more than feelings you knew it always amazes us to write and what we put it in there. Nice pen, Arthur. Hugs and kisses. Amor// Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 12:22 PM Thanks for your sweet words Amor

Charmaine Chircop March 29, 2015 at 10:19 PM Ahh those confessions of love,and to be read,felt and taken by the one is ever so sweet and every poets' dream.Lovely poem indeed!Charma Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 12:21 PM Thank you, you are most charming Charma!

Charmaine Chircop March 29, 2015 at 10:19 PM I love the pic : )