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All poets are dreamers and writers Who weave life into verse and rhyme Verse into heartfelt contemplations The heart desires Longs For attention A poet will expose himself to his great lengths His ink shall flow like emotions dancing on a page He may need to erase his thoughts, annul his dreams Thus his pencil stands guard and erect Love is erased with little effect He scribbles his musings onto blank pages Wondering if maybe the lass he so dreams Will sit upon his pencil Reading his very confessions of love

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/12/2015 4:22:00 PM

This brilliant piece is yet another example of why you are one of our premier poets! It deserves a "7" - BRAVO!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/12/2015 10:46:00 PM

Oh Pandita, I will have to increase your pay with those kind words!!!!!

Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 8:11:00 AM

great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/12/2015 10:45:00 PM

Thank you Funom, you are very kind as usual!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/1/2015 6:50:00 PM

Cute picture to accompany your poem *lol*. There is so much I can say with this one but I will resist!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/4/2015 2:26:00 PM

I was sure I would have you smiling at this one!!!!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2015 9:03:00 PM

What is nice about a pencil is the eraser, it can move words around until your true feelings show. Blessings sir and a 7

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/4/2015 2:26:00 PM

I never thought of my pencil quite that way! hugs!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/30/2015 8:38:00 PM

A deeply contemplative write, Arthur. A poet can't help him/herselfself, but to write what he/she feels especially if it's about the love he/she has for someone. A 7.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/4/2015 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Kim, I couldn't agree more!

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/30/2015 1:29:00 PM

Not just romantic verse but deeply profound verse as well. A7 and this is a writers gem my friend. Bravooooooo!!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/4/2015 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Kindly Robert!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2015 3:51:00 AM

Wonderful emotions in your poem my friend. Oh I do hope your pencil never gets blunt - boy you do have such a big one for a girl to perch on Arthur! Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2015 2:39:00 PM

lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/4/2015 2:24:00 PM

LOL thanks Jan, and I completely agree with your brilliant observations!

Amor Otong

Date: 3/29/2015 11:31:00 PM

In writing you have to confess your feelings and more than feelings you knew it always amazes us to write and what we put it in there. Nice pen, Arthur. Hugs and kisses. Amor//

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/4/2015 12:22:00 PM

Thanks for your sweet words Amor

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/29/2015 10:19:00 PM

Ahh those confessions of love,and to be read,felt and taken by the one is ever so sweet and every poets' dream.Lovely poem indeed!Charma

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/4/2015 12:21:00 PM

Thank you, you are most charming Charma!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/29/2015 10:19:00 PM

I love the pic : )