A POETs CRUSH IS FICKLE

Happened upon black-eyed Susans,
so bright and beautiful. I stopped
and looked, snapped
a picture with my cell, drew back
breath and sighed; eyed
with appreciation, didn’t matter
where I found this gregarious garden
before I set out on
an inside adventure
with books. But stunned
by the sunny disposition
of this carefree crop,
my eyes popp’n with pure joy.
I soaked up the inverted petals.
I just wrote about your yellow suds,
and oh how they froth and yield
a smile - on my lips, in my eyes,
and my heart. How
do, perennials! I will forget your patch
but another bouquet will be dispatched.
In afterglow
I fill my bag with poets:
Hughes, Frost, Angelou, Greger
and Glück. You see
I’ve already moved on,
forgotten thee.
Leaving the library.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your awesome work being on the winners' list in PD's contest. Excellent. Way to go. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 6:53 AM
What fun Kim. I always enjoy your unique flow and form. Congratulations on this win! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Linda!
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October 1, 2024 at 3:17 PM
Hi Kim, love the flow of your poem, Congratulations, thank you for entering my contest. Always PD ~LINDA~
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 9:04 PM
Thank you, Linda! I enjoyed writing for your contest!
Callus Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 12:58 AM
Flirting and having crushes can become an everyday occurrence with many a poet, Kim :) I can imagine a bee being tempted by different flowers, stopping, enjoying and then moving on to pastures new! ~ Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Love that Paul! Thank you for adding that wonderful imagery!!
Rolland Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 10:31 PM
playful ending, really, Kim, i can feel the perfcet emotion here, and the happiness of the adventure, great improvisation , yann
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Buehler Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 7:57 PM
I ennjoyed this playful poem, and its humorous touches, Kim. Wonderfully composed. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Hind Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 7:29 PM
Very interesting, down to earth poetry.... lovin it
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 7:31 PM
Thanks, Paige!
May Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 4:24 PM
A floeery inspiratin, Very nicely penned
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Puddifoot Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 3:51 PM
indeed it is..this poem is fun and flirty but clever at the same time, and i enjoyed the read..louise gluck is a favourite of mine :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 3:54 PM
Thank you, Charlotte! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 2:02 PM
I enjoyed your wonderful write. Have a fun day writing away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 2:52 PM
Thank you, Paula! I appreciate your visit! :)
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