A Poet Lifts Late Afternoon Shades

The mood of Autumn falls — dimmer switch of twilight. The deep, lovely sprawl — a yellow-orange sprite. 11/7/2018
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Faulkner Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:11 PM
My autumn afternoons here have been just beautiful, your poem is such a perfect picture of it!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Thank you, dear Michelle!
Hagy Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 9:28 PM
This is sweet Kim :)...I'm curious... is your Sprite here alive or liquid in a bottle?! :0 Have a lovely day :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 7:24 AM
This sprite is more related to an electrical discharge on top of a cloud as lightening is striking below creating a colorful light. :)
Green Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Simply beautiful Kim. Short and oh so sweet. Loved this one my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Cunningham Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 2:47 AM
Lovely image Kim, the spectacular shades of autumn. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Lovely, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Thank you, Line!
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 7:51 PM
The image is right there for me, Kim. Just wish Autumn wouldn't have fallen so fast, so to speak. Nicely done! ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Thank you, my friend!
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