A Poet Lifts Late Afternoon Shades

The mood of Autumn falls — dimmer switch of twilight. The deep, lovely sprawl — a yellow-orange sprite. 11/7/2018

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/10/2018 4:11:00 PM

My autumn afternoons here have been just beautiful, your poem is such a perfect picture of it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2018 5:46:00 PM

Thank you, dear Michelle!

Chris Hagy

Date: 11/8/2018 9:28:00 PM

This is sweet Kim :)...I'm curious... is your Sprite here alive or liquid in a bottle?! :0 Have a lovely day :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2018 7:24:00 AM

This sprite is more related to an electrical discharge on top of a cloud as lightening is striking below creating a colorful light. :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/8/2018 1:15:00 PM

Simply beautiful Kim. Short and oh so sweet. Loved this one my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2018 7:16:00 AM

Thank you, Chris!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/8/2018 2:47:00 AM

Lovely image Kim, the spectacular shades of autumn. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you, Tom!

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/7/2018 11:06:00 PM

Lovely, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you, Line!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/7/2018 7:51:00 PM

The image is right there for me, Kim. Just wish Autumn wouldn't have fallen so fast, so to speak. Nicely done! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2018 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!