A Poem Within a Poem

What you're holding in your hands
Is a poem within a poem
Both far enough apart
But close enough to get along
Set within each other
So as not to be alone
This poem that you're now holding
This poem within a poem

One poem rhymes it all in love
From beginning to the end
Talks of those new beginnings
And the giving within the giving
How love holds a lasting truth
And spreads it faithfully
This poem that rhymes it all in love
Then holds it out for all to read

While the other poem talks of the past
The what has and hasn't been
The artful way of looking back
And how it is now seen
What you gave up that you once had
That you wish you had again
This poem that brings up the past
A scent that's on the wind

Both poems similar in degree
But very different all the same
Both bring love into the notion
That you can have it once again
While they are relatable
In the way these poems both bleed
They both are very different
In their basics needs

So what you now hold in your hands
This poem within a poem
Is far enough apart from one another
But close enough to get along
Placed here both together
So as to not go it alone
This poem of the past and of the love
This poem within a poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/19/2018 11:23:00 PM
Wow -m A FAVE, Mike. Totally charming in its circularity.
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Mike Hauser
Date: 12/19/2018 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Line. :0)
Date: 12/19/2018 3:06:00 PM
I love this Mike! Enjoyed it very much :)
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Mike Hauser
Date: 12/19/2018 11:43:00 PM
Than you Heidi!
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