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A Poem Was Hatched

I sat and watched
you watched and sat
a poem was hatched
and that was that
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:49 AM
This is simply beautiful and clever, Linda, congratulations:)
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Dear Jo, you words are warmly received. Many thanks! :)
George Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Congratulations Londa on your great win !
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Hi Valsa. Thank you for the congrats! :)
Buehler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 7:39 PM
A delightful poem, Linda! Congratulations. :)
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Many thanks dear Evelyn. :)
Volumes Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 12:58 PM
Even happier now to see it won a podium place. Congrats my friend.
Fowler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Oh my - thanks for letting me know Svvie!! And for the congrats my dear friend. :)
George Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 9:21 AM
This sounds so cute ! It is on such moments that poems are hatched. All the best dear Linda !
Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Yes Valsa, they are. :) Thanks for stopping by! :)
One Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Sounds lovely...I hope you wrote it down..
Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Always dear, always... :) Thank you for stopping and commenting. I appreciate your time. :)
Hawley Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Very nice!
Fowler Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Good morning Miranda. Thank you! :)
Bauer Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:22 PM
this is charming, linda!
Fowler Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Thank you Ilene :):)
Volumes Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:22 AM
But are you sure ? Loved seeing you watch that poem hatch. :) :) :) :) :) 8) 8) :) :) :) :) :)
Fowler Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Too bad 'watched' and 'hatched' don't rhyme, but it looks cute. ;);) I'm glad it made you happy Svvie! :)
Tor Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 7:34 PM
lol thanks for the hatch hope you have many more to hatch... Thanks for posting Linda brought a smile...
Fowler Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Oh Michael - so glad to see you. It's been a while. I'm glad you found a smile in this ! Thank you. :)
M  Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 5:22 PM
So simple and so sweet …..little owl! Love it…..Debx
Fowler Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:08 PM
Thank you for your sweet words Deb. Sometimes simple is best. LO ;) :)
Rolland Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 3:44 PM
as simply as that, enjoyed yann
Fowler Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Thank you Yann! Appreciate your visit and comments. :)
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