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A Poem To My Girlfriend

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A dreamt a dream that came from my heart, When I woke I knew what to do, I had to search and probe and look everywhere, To find somebody like you, So I pulled my jeans up, put my shoes on, And rose as proud as I could, And I locked all reason away in a pocket, Then, proudly, I simply stood, And looked for a girl with virtue and right A woman who lives for today, A woman who is spontaneously bright, A woman who’ll devotedly stay, By my side to live happily free, To share every small moment of fun, That’s when I saw you on that cold stormy night, When my heart said you are the one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/6/2017 6:03:00 AM
Wow! Lewis, This is my kind of write. It was like reading a good book or watching a movie. Love at first sight. Nice write:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/5/2017 6:30:00 PM
This is wonderful Lewis! Love at first sight blessed :)
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Date: 12/5/2017 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Maureen, love at first sight is he best :)
Date: 12/5/2017 6:12:00 PM
A very sweet poem Lewis. It seems you just knew that it was right. Happy that you have found the one :)
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Date: 12/5/2017 6:31:00 PM
Thanks Judy, I'm glad you enjoy this write :)

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