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A Poem To My Country

Dear fatherland the cradle of races you lie among the many with great sight of differences in this mulatto of western languages Oh great triangle! you rise and fall like ocean tides in landscape and beauty in patois and culture Tell me you're not corrupt deny racial discrimination country of peace river of prawns, Africa in miniature Cameroon.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/11/2010 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Richard. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 11/10/2010 2:08:00 PM

Recognition after recognition ! This should tell you how fantastic this poetry is dear poet ! Congratulations ! much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2010 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Richard. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/23/2009 3:28:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Richard and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:32:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2009 1:54:00 PM

Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Richard! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 11:46:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/22/2009 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations on having this wonderful poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/20/2009 7:09:00 AM

Beautiful poem! Congrats on feature poem this week!

John Freeman

Date: 11/18/2009 5:41:00 PM

Richard congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sincerely, Moses

P Sheart

Date: 11/16/2009 11:51:00 AM

Congrats on feature poem this week! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 11/16/2009 10:50:00 AM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2009 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/15/2009 10:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

Date: 11/15/2009 6:08:00 PM

Interesting thoughts for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2009 5:49:00 AM

What a wonderful way to start a new week reading your new poetry Richard.Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2009 12:11:00 PM

Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara